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My heart is torn, my body broken, my mind is weak

Through roses and thorns, hand him the token

Words so soft their barely spoken

A heart beat so strong

What went wrong?

Its me not you

Words that are so true

Such a useless line

You were never really mine

Thought you were different from the others

Now look at me crying to my mother

Together for such a short time

Then you turn your back on me at the drop of a dime

Fall to my knees in shock

Picking up a single flat rock

With a smooth surface and sharp edges

Reminds me of you and your false pledges

I stand up brushing off the dirt

Wiping my tears away with the sleeve of my shirt

Eyes turned toward the clear blue sky

Realizing this will be our last goodbye



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Last Goodbye
Date: Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 02:52:39 PM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: mashley06



My heart is torn, my body broken, my mind is weak

Through roses and thorns, hand him the token

Words so soft their barely spoken

A heart beat so strong

What went wrong?

Its me not you

Words that are so true

Such a useless line

You were never really mine

Thought you were different from the others

Now look at me crying to my mother

Together for such a short time

Then you turn your back on me at the drop of a dime

Fall to my knees in shock

Picking up a single flat rock

With a smooth surface and sharp edges

Reminds me of you and your false pledges

I stand up brushing off the dirt

Wiping my tears away with the sleeve of my shirt

Eyes turned toward the clear blue sky

Realizing this will be our last goodbye



Please comment and tell me what you think...good or bad






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