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tonight, i came and read a poem
written years ago by a new poet,
he had lost his mom; his heart broken
not one person could be outspoken,

what would it have taken to show
some concern, this is how we learn,
my heart breaks for this young man
why to come back should he plan?

it angered me for not one had dared
to let him know that someone cared,
to leave a comment so that he knew
we poets do care if one is so blue,

he commented on others; did his part
whilst breaking of sadness in his heart,
a beautiful soul now no longer writes
this poet has gone off into the night,

tonight, i came and read a poem
written years ago by a new poet,
he had lost his mom; his heart broken
not one person could be outspoken.

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forsaken
Date: Wednesday, 7th May 2014 @ 01:59:33 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry


Contributed By: ladyfawn







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tonight, i came and read a poem
written years ago by a new poet,
he had lost his mom; his heart broken
not one person could be outspoken,

what would it have taken to show
some concern, this is how we learn,
my heart breaks for this young man
why to come back should he plan?

it angered me for not one had dared
to let him know that someone cared,
to leave a comment so that he knew
we poets do care if one is so blue,

he commented on others; did his part
whilst breaking of sadness in his heart,
a beautiful soul now no longer writes
this poet has gone off into the night,

tonight, i came and read a poem
written years ago by a new poet,
he had lost his mom; his heart broken
not one person could be outspoken.

§* *§
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A Talk With Mom by JustinLW: http://www.your-poetry.com/modules.php?name=News&file=article&thold=-1&mode=flat&order=0&sid=162033#527549

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