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the words and comments
that my flows get
keep me from falling all the way down,
sometimes I feel so low
I scream and scream
without making a sound...
that's what it must be
because no one ever notices me.

As emotions ebb and flow
Appolonia lets me know
that she knows how I feel
and get lifted
I start get up from falling down,
and when Nessa lets me know
that she's my friend
and that
she will always be around
that makes feel so good.

Then Hauntedscorp speaks
and all Illusions are shattered
he reminds me
it's just a moment
and it will pass,
slowly I begin to understand what matters
and that's never giving up
just like timotheous said,
and I want to thank you all
for helping me
as I was experincing a fall.

As I continue to dig out
of this prison I created
it's good to see
that there are others
who can feel what I feel,
it's so good to have you all around me.

I'm going to go now
and
drift on a flow....
but before I go
I just make sure you all know
that your
words and comments are so beautiful.
And
I just realized
that this is a emotional moment :)
cause I could go on and on
about the way I feel
man it feels so good to be real
and I"m out.......
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Words And Comments
Date: Sunday, 5th October 2014 @ 02:07:12 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: UNKNOWN_UTOPIA
I thought I'd let you know
the words and comments
that my flows get
keep me from falling all the way down,
sometimes I feel so low
I scream and scream
without making a sound...
that's what it must be
because no one ever notices me.

As emotions ebb and flow
Appolonia lets me know
that she knows how I feel
and get lifted
I start get up from falling down,
and when Nessa lets me know
that she's my friend
and that
she will always be around
that makes feel so good.

Then Hauntedscorp speaks
and all Illusions are shattered
he reminds me
it's just a moment
and it will pass,
slowly I begin to understand what matters
and that's never giving up
just like timotheous said,
and I want to thank you all
for helping me
as I was experincing a fall.

As I continue to dig out
of this prison I created
it's good to see
that there are others
who can feel what I feel,
it's so good to have you all around me.

I'm going to go now
and
drift on a flow....
but before I go
I just make sure you all know
that your
words and comments are so beautiful.
And
I just realized
that this is a emotional moment :)
cause I could go on and on
about the way I feel
man it feels so good to be real
and I"m out.......


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