Array ( [sid] => 36995 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Paradise [time] => 2004-03-01 23:54:35 [hometext] => I've submitted this poem before but I didnt really get much feedback from anyone. I'd really like to kno what ppl think. This is one of my favorites. Please tell me if theres anything I can do or change to make it better. [bodytext] => glistening yellow
sun
reflecting off
crystal clear
water
falling into
beautiful white
waterfalls
far beyond sight
touching the crisp baby blue
sky
bridge-like arched
rainbows
adding a splash
of color
here and there
the calling
of animals
hushes
as the sky darkens
gleaming stars
appearing
one by one
dotting the sky
light rain falls
dampening
lush green
trees
everybody
everything
all safely resting
for the night
in the arms
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Paradise
Date: Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:54:35 PM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: monkey
glistening yellow
sun
reflecting off
crystal clear
water
falling into
beautiful white
waterfalls
far beyond sight
touching the crisp baby blue
sky
bridge-like arched
rainbows
adding a splash
of color
here and there
the calling
of animals
hushes
as the sky darkens
gleaming stars
appearing
one by one
dotting the sky
light rain falls
dampening
lush green
trees
everybody
everything
all safely resting
for the night
in the arms
of paradise

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