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so beautiful it stole my breath.
Entranced by you wholly.
I could feel your pain
in every written word.
So shy to the touch.
So open to emotion.
So sweet and caring
yet a dark cloud hung
over you sweet head.
I'm told I can't save
the world but I
sure can try to.
I would have given
all that I could have
just to put a smile on
your pretty face.
Sometimes I wish I
could have understood you.
The lights are out though
and this house is so cold.
So far away from where
we used to be together.
It only snows here now
and it's so far from where
I want to be.
I'm sorry.
I miss you.
Goodbye.

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Sometimes...
Date: Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:43:15 AM AEST
Topic: Sad Poetry

Contributed By: Cobalt
I saw you standing there
so beautiful it stole my breath.
Entranced by you wholly.
I could feel your pain
in every written word.
So shy to the touch.
So open to emotion.
So sweet and caring
yet a dark cloud hung
over you sweet head.
I'm told I can't save
the world but I
sure can try to.
I would have given
all that I could have
just to put a smile on
your pretty face.
Sometimes I wish I
could have understood you.
The lights are out though
and this house is so cold.
So far away from where
we used to be together.
It only snows here now
and it's so far from where
I want to be.
I'm sorry.
I miss you.
Goodbye.

Raven's Sin

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