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Emmie74

Hehehe, my boyfriend has a shaved head and we get to see it in just over 12 hours... hehehe, I wanna touch it! lol love always, ~ Dee

2002-08-16 20:11

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EileenK

Thanks Jenni. This is a resubmitted version of a poem I posted earlier this year. This is the first time I have logged onto this site after its change and am enjoying it whilst sitting here on a cold wet Sunday afternoon in Sydney Australia. I have always enjoyed your poems and hope to submit some myself soon.

2002-08-18 12:37

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Phildel

Mack22

Thanks for commenting on my poetry! I was kinda confused with one of your comments though, the one for \"Veiled Gypsy\", did you mean you didn\'t know how you were feeling or how I was when I wrote the poem? I thought I\'d just tell you a few of my better poems,( moon death and veiled gypsy are not amongst them!) : \"Alaska (a cold world)\" \"An Epic for Lost Cassandra\" These are probably the best two, although if you have time, The Horizon Burns is also good. You could go to my page to read them, otherwise they\'re all listed under august! Have you any poetry on this site? If so give me the titles and i\'ll read them! Regards, Phildel

2002-08-19 00:15

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MeaninglessSemantics

Thanx jenni, it means a lot <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif"> I have a few other poems on here if your interested. They include \"lost\", \"rat of the sands\", \"peace of heart, peice of heart\", \"dont fade away...\", and \"Fallen star; speed of light\" c ya

2002-08-19 13:46

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EileenK

No I have always used this name. I think my previous poems are on the old site somewhere. [quote] On 2002-08-18 13:02, Jenni Kalicharan wrote: Thank you also.... Did you post under a different name...?? Jenni <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif\"> [/quote]

2002-08-19 15:28

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Daniel_Brabble

Chrissie

Just dropping you a small line to let you know how deeply I appreciate your support of my rather ungainly (at times) writing and how much it meant that a rare individual from this page even noticed my return. Thanks Chrissie. Your kindness has been a real inspiration.

2002-08-20 13:57

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Daniel_Brabble

Chrissie

[quote] On 2002-08-20 23:37, Chrissie wrote: [quote] On 2002-08-20 13:57, Daniel Brabble wrote: Just dropping you a small line to let you know how deeply I appreciate your support of my rather ungainly (at times) writing and how much it meant that a rare individual from this page even noticed my return. Thanks Chrissie. Your kindness has been a real inspiration. [/quote] Hi Daniel, Thank you so much for your sweet message. There really is no need to thank me though. I am genuinely pleased to see you back here and I have always loved your poetry. I hope you keep submitting. I myself have hit a bit of a block which is upsetting me a bit but I\'m trying not to panic... Take care Chrissie x [/quote] I\'ve always loved your poetry. Please don\'t panic, there\'s really no need. Since your poetry is one of the purest languages of your soul you shouldn\'t feel a need to manufacture for everyone. Just let your heart speak and when it flows from you it flows. I do hope to read more from you in the not-so-distant future though. Take care Chrissie. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-08-22 14:15

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Emmie74

Hey sweetie! I miss you! I should be in bed but I alreadly slept and I\'m not tired! I think I\'ll call the school today and get an appointment to fix my stupid schedule. I hung out with Dave tonight. I wrote you an email about it but your account\'s full, probably with stuff from me, hehe, so I sent it to myself, and when you get back and check your email and clean it out, I\'ll send it to you. I\'m seeing him again on Friday, and I don\'t know what I\'m doing today other than calling the school. Hey, it\'s 4:44. Of course. Man, I still haven\'t peed yet, and I needed to pee a couple hours ago, lol Love always, ~ Dee <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-08-22 21:47

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bobotheclown

What\'s up? thanx 4 reading my poem yeah I guess it is a little awkward but the line \"I broke the window with my show\" I messed up it was supposed to be\"I broke the window with my shoe\" I was kinda tired when I typed it up! Sorry bout that ya know I read that poem over and I think it\'s pretty dumb I liked alot at 1st but now I just think it\'s written very badly. oh well I won\'t worry bout it. thanx again though Christy

2002-08-26 09:27

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bobotheclown

No, Christy I have to disagree with you. I dont think it was written badly at all. Its hard to write about something if you\'ve never experienced it before. I think you did an awesome job. Hmmm there\'s a penguin up there but I cant get it to come up one of my nicknames is penguin, but yeah tangent. You write awesome poems on heartache and friends committing suicide because you\'ve experienced it. I write good poems (no I am not stuck up but I do think I write good poems) on depression and anger because I have experienced, but no your poem was not crappy. That\'s all I have to say! -bobo undefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefinedundefined undefinedundefined lol sry

2002-08-26 13:48

1340

thank you, I hope you enjoy all my work and if you do relate to this, I hope it\'s in the best way! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-08-28 09:37

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Clarity

thank you so much, i hope you enjoy all i have tried to post and it helps knowing I have fans that enjoy it as much as I do! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-08-28 09:40

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Mack22

hello, just wanted you to know since you liked one of my earlier poems i have many more up on the site and many more to come, thank you for all the knid words ! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-08-28 09:45

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MisterRight

Mick_Puttock

Wow, ya learn something new every day!!! thanks! Curtis [quote] On 2002-08-28 12:15, Mick wrote: Just thought I would let you know if you didnt already of course, just tell me to um yeah, if you do <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> that in your account page (click on the Your Account option) there is an icon saying \"change home\", click on this, and then you can put the number of poems you want displayed on the home page for your account (I think default is either 10 or 30). The maximum number you can place here is 127. [/quote]

2002-08-28 12:54

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Robert_Edgar_Burns

hehehehe i know what u mean it is certainly different in here now i am having trouble also...i noticed not many comments reallly on poems...the old site was much much better much much easier.....nice to hear from u and i will catch up with u ...yeah email is certainly alot easier......til soon ...Tanya...<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> On 2002-08-28 14:06, Robert Edgar Burns wrote: Hi Tanya, I don\'t really know how to post messages here as it confuses me at times because it seems when I try my computer crashes. But I put my email at the bottom of my poems so you could write me direct if you\'d like. I hope you get this message o.k. Love, Rob [/quote]

2002-08-28 15:17

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Chrissylee

[quote] On 2002-08-08 18:49, Chrissylee wrote: Time as they say heals all wounds, that is very untrue as people that have been through this do know. I thankyou Jason from the bottom of my heart for your comments on my poem. I feel for both you and especially your sister. The thing that has got me through all of this and many other different types of abuse that i have been through is that there are others out there that have been through far more than i have had to endure. Thankyou again. <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> [/quote] I am glad that you have a big enough heart to realize that although your abuse was terrible (as all abuse is) that it was not an isolated case, and hope that you can find comfort through sharing your experiances with others who can understand what you\'ve been through. alot of people who are terribly abused, hold it in and end up being the very thing that they hate. Remember to always let things out, via discussions or writing, so that they don\'t explode in a negative way. If there was no such thing as paper and pen, and god didn\'t give me the gift of verbal art... well, who knows what evil ways i would let the pain out. thank you for your response and always keep your chin up. much love- jason <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-08-29 08:17

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Terry_Stephen_Driscoll

Hi Terry and hope all is well with u....It certainly is abit quite in here now...not like it use to be in old site...the poems sent in dont stay real long on main page alot of ones who use to use the old site dont seem to come in as much..and not many comments on the poems i have noticed with them all..oh well this happens....hope to hear from u soon.....take care....Tanya....<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> On 2002-07-14 09:27, Terry Stephen Driscoll wrote: Just a quick hi - I hope all is well with you and most of all that you\'re happy. Luv Terry [/quote] <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif">

2002-08-29 14:59

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RICHARD_CAMPBELL

HI CHATABOX, THANK YOU VERY MUCH,DON\'T WORRY ABOUT THOSE LAUGHTER LINES,AM SURE THEY LOOK FINE.AM GLAD YOU LIKE MY WRITE.

2002-08-30 13:32

1354

thank you and i hope things work for you soon also, it helps knowing i have fans of my poems! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-08-31 05:43

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MisterRight

addie

Wow addie, I think we\'re living the same live one step behind eachother. I too, a few years ago, fell in love with my friends girlfriend. I actually hung out with her more than he did we were inseperable. So, I understand how hard it is for you to let this girl know how you feel. But, I think you should feel out the situation and really search your heart. Like I said before, if love isn\'t worth the risk, NOTHING is. Ever wondered what the point of life is? In my opinion it\'s love!! Don\'t let anything stand in the way of love, nothing is more important. I think your work is excellent and I hope to see more soon. I read \"Lost Love\" tonight and I thought it was great. Keep writing. Curtis [quote] On 2002-08-31 05:03, addie wrote: hi curtis ... it really makes me happy to see that u njoy my work ...and it really inspires me to write more ....actually i guess there is no one else other than poetry that i can speak to ... i have a reall good friend ...for whom i have developed an iclination...and i dont want to lose her by telling her how i feel ..cause she is going around with my best friend ... so i cant do nethin bout it ... ne ways thanks for those lovely quotes...and thanks a lot for the appreciation ... take care addie addie [/quote]

2002-08-31 15:55

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Terry_Stephen_Driscoll

how long does a girl have to wait for Mr Driscoll.......to come out with his lemon drops!!! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_lol.gif">

2002-08-31 21:39

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Rose

Thank you so much for your kind words to me! I will take your advice and just wait but ya know I don\'t know what it is about me guys don\'t like.. I\'ve got dirty blond hair I\'m 5\'6 and skinny but I guess not skinny enough. Guys have made me believe I\'m ugly coz they don\'t like me. I dunno n e wayz thanx a bunch once again <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> my e-mail address is <a href="mailto:jmck@psknet.com">jmck@psknet.com</a> if you would ever like to e-mail me and my aim is dramakid25 maybe I\'ll talk to ya sometime.. Take care Sweetie

2002-09-01 01:36

1360

I just wanted to thank you so much for offering to listen to me. You don\'t even know how much that touched me. Here you are thousands of miles away from me not knowing who I am and you offer to help me. While I sit here surrounded by all these people I know and not one of them offered to help. It really means alot to me. You are definitely a caring soul. Also thank you for the kind comments on my work.

2002-09-01 04:33

1361

Suzy, I meant what I said..ok....e-mail me if you need to talk.... I\'ve been through a lot in my life...and I know it helps just to have someone listen... (((hugs))) Jenni

2002-09-01 08:00

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MisterRight

addie

Well Addie, if you say she\'s looking for a reason to break it off with this guy, there are two things you can do. One: Let her know how you feel, if you don\'t want to tell her you love her yet, just let her know your interested, maybe you\'ll be what she needs to let this other guy go. Two: You can try to wait it out and see if she eventually does break up with him on her own, for some other reason. Then she\'ll be available, this guy won\'t think it was your doing, and you can do your best to move on in. Personally, I would probably tell her how I felt, doing that in the past has caused me more heartache than it has good, but I can never seem to get the \"What ifs\" out of my head. Like, what if I don\'t tell her and she really feels the same way and we never have the chance. So, I usually just throw caution to the wind and just go for it. Whatever you decide, I wish the best of luck to you. And if you\'re looking for someone to discuss things with, I\'d be more than happy to keep messageing back and forth like this. Sometimes it\'s easier to talk to someone you don\'t know and doesn\'t know you, that way it\'s totally unbiased. Wish you the best Curtis [quote] On 2002-09-01 04:03, addie wrote: Yea i agree curtis ... we live for love ... so true .. but i am in such a position i dont know who to turn to and ask .. cause it is she who i always turn to for my problems ... and the guy i am calling my best friend ... is not my best friend .. in the sense he\'s used me ... and played with my emotions .. and is playing with her\'s ... and she\'s also like pissed off with him . .and is looking for an opportunity to break up...and like these days she\'s sad .. and i am tryin to talk it out to her and make her happy ... but u know the whole i night i keep thinking bout her ... i call other people by her name ... and all these things have made me feel that i love her ... and i just cant tell her .... cause i am so afraid that i might lose such a presious friendship....and another thing.. i have shifted from or home town to another .. and am undergoing training there ..... well i guess i wanted to share all this with someone .. and after hearing ur bit ...i thought u r the best person to share this problem of mine ... and the essence of the whole thing is ..\"I AM CONFUSED\".....and i am really trying to figure out what to do .. ne ways .. it was also gr8 to see how u feel ....hope that like all problems ... this one has a solution too... [quote] On 2002-08-31 15:55, MisterRight wrote: Wow addie, I think we\'re living the same live one step behind eachother. I too, a few years ago, fell in love with my friends girlfriend. I actually hung out with her more than he did we were inseperable. So, I understand how hard it is for you to let this girl know how you feel. But, I think you should feel out the situation and really search your heart. Like I said before, if love isn\'t worth the risk, NOTHING is. Ever wondered what the point of life is? In my opinion it\'s love!! Don\'t let anything stand in the way of love, nothing is more important. I think your work is excellent and I hope to see more soon. I read \"Lost Love\" tonight and I thought it was great. Keep writing. Curtis [quote] On 2002-08-31 05:03, addie wrote: hi curtis ... it really makes me happy to see that u njoy my work ...and it really inspires me to write more ....actually i guess there is no one else other than poetry that i can speak to ... i have a reall good friend ...for whom i have developed an iclination...and i dont want to lose her by telling her how i feel ..cause she is going around with my best friend ... so i cant do nethin bout it ... ne ways thanks for those lovely quotes...and thanks a lot for the appreciation ... take care addie addie [/quote] [/quote] <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_eek.gif\"> <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif\"> <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif\"> <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_eek.gif\"> <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_frown.gif\"> [/quote]

2002-09-01 12:41

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papajfat

thanks for the comment and the advice, hope I wasn\'t charged. Though i may be an alcholic vagrant, i still manage to keep a smooth and clean shaven face,the only thing there are expressions. and sarcastically is in the hobo english to gibberish dictionary, ey. so i don\'t know what your talking aboot

2002-09-08 12:09

1368

I\'d just like to thank-you for your replies to my poems. This is my first time placing them in a public forum and yours were the first replies I received. Thank-you for your graciousness. It\'s inspiring to hear that other have enjoyed your work.

2002-09-11 07:10

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Lovingangel4u

outsider

Just to remind you I love u very much and it was ok that u slept on me early this morning, <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_redface.gif"> it was so late for you. Ashame tho I wanted to make love to u <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH Have a wonderful day my love. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-09-11 14:34

1371

thank you for all the comments, maybe i can read your mind, cause when hearts hurt i think everyone feels it, hope things get better for you if their not going well right now.... <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-09-12 07:41

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mark

Jazz

2002-09-12 08:53

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Ophelia

I was extremely hurt when I wrote this poem. I know that no one is better off dead. I also think that you shouldn\'t even leave a score or comment unless you have something positive to say. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cry.gif">

2002-09-13 02:11

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jonteD

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif"> It\'s not a case of not wanting passion, it\'s more a case of what to do when confronted by it! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif">

2002-09-14 05:43

1378

Thank-you for the lovely response. There are a lot of compliments to can give people about their writing but to say it touch is probably the kindest and most wonderful comment any writer can receive. Once again, Thank-you.

2002-09-14 06:45

1379

First, thank-you for taking the time to comment, it\'s always appreciated. This poem was actually a complete unbinding of all the things that are wrapped up within me now. More of a writing down and expressing my feelings rather than a poetic design. The story of this triangular struggle is a long one and I won\'t bore you with the details, except to say that the person I am writing about does not know the way I feel even though I\'ve loved her for years. Life\'s circumstances have always kept us apart and I have never had the opportunity to express myself to her directly, therefore I try to do so in my poetry. The reason I said this poem is inspired is because it is the first poem I have written that describes her, what she means to me and how I feel in a direct fashion. (EG: She, Her, etc...) All my other poems were more indirect. This time what I felt I wrote, not for rhymes sake but for hearts sake. So again I thank you for your kind comments and am sorry for babbling this way. I promise not to make a habit of it. Until later, Doug.

2002-09-17 01:50

1380

Once again thank-you for the kind comment. The answer is no, I have never published a book and honestly wouldn\'t know how to go about doing that. Still writing poetry is new to me and all my poems so far are here and on my site. Don\'t worry they most likely won\'t be the last. Again thank-you, Doug

2002-09-17 02:22

1381

Thanks for the comment....So far you\'re the only one. I noticed that you had a book out: \"Beneath The Surface\" By Jenni Kalicharan & Nicole Rahaman How did it go? The thought of publishing flirted across my mind but I\'m not sure if it\'s worth the trouble or not. Anyway, again thanks for the comment. They\'re always appreciated. <g>

2002-09-17 07:05

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RICHARD_CAMPBELL

HI SUZY, I\'M SORRY FOR THE EORRS IN MY POEM,I AM WORKING ON THEM EVERY DAY.THANKS ONCE AGAIN FOR READING MY WORK. I APPRECAITE ALL COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD.THATS THE ONLY WAY I COULD INPROVE . THANKS YOU. RICHARD CAMPBELL, WRITER. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cool.gif">

2002-09-18 04:14

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Re: The Dance (Score: 1) by Valerie Pearson on Wednesday, September 18 @ 07:23:21 EDT (User Info | Send a Message) how sweet, she must of been someone very dear, (possibly wallpaper, just kidding, another great write) Someone very dear... (Don\'t have enough for wallpaper...yet.) <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-09-18 07:37

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Scarlet

Hey, you responded to one of my poems \"In the Shadows\" and I just thought you might like my poetry/short story website. Would love to know what you think. www.poetryexpressions.com Deborah

2002-09-18 09:00

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Scarlet

Chrissylee

2002-09-18 09:00

1388

Thanks for taking the time to comment. I try to get back to all who do and say thanks or answer questions. You asked what type of band I\'m putting together... I guess the answer to that is I don\'t know. I still need to find a band...lol. I\'ve heard that instruments help, but hey... I do the best with what I have. I\'ve been looking for ads in papers for a singer/songwritter, but nothing as of yet. Wish me luck... with love-jason <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif">

2002-09-20 04:17

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Phildel

Thank you for your generous reply on my sond entitled: Ugly. You asked if I had written a score yet, and the answer to that is no. I am still looking for a band to help me out with that department. The only song I wrote and have a complete score to is As One, but I still need the band to help me tweak it a little. So wish me luck in finding the right people. Bless you is all that you do. -jason <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-09-20 04:22

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papajfat

Thanks for your positive feedback... it means alot to me. I really hope that I can pull a band out of my ass and get this thing going. I edited Beast Behind the Flag, added a bit to it- if you wanna check it out. I like your work alot too, you flow well and write about good stuff. Keep it up! by the way... check out Herpeghonasyphilaids... my newest addition. It has more of a story to it, I remember you commenting on one of my pieces that it needed more of a story or characters. Tell me what you think about the new one, cool? Alrighty then, have a great day!!! Peace out - jason

2002-09-20 04:28

1391

Hey there sweetie, how ya been? Hope you are good and staying busy. I just wanted to write and thank you for all your positive comments. It brightens up my day every time I read one. I just posted my newest masterpiece, \"Herpeghonasyphilaids.\" check it out when you get the chance and tell me how it is... luv ya -jason <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-09-20 04:35

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spice

jonteD

How are you these days, don\'t seem to hear anything from you. How are you feeling, do you still want me? Love Vanda.xxx

2002-09-21 02:02

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[quote] On 2002-09-20 04:17, Jason Robert Britt wrote: Thanks for taking the time to comment. I try to get back to all who do and say thanks or answer questions. You asked what type of band I\'m putting together... I guess the answer to that is I don\'t know. I still need to find a band...lol. I\'ve heard that instruments help, but hey... I do the best with what I have. I\'ve been looking for ads in papers for a singer/songwritter, but nothing as of yet. Wish me luck... with love-jason <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif\"> [/quote] <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif"> I do wish you luck, your dream will come true, it only takes time, you right beautiful, maybe in the future I\'ll see you on TV perhaps, good luck and keep writing

2002-09-21 03:12

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MissAnneThropy

Tonic

I\'m kinda going nutz here.. When you get here we really have to talk. And you\'re probably not going to agree with what I have to say & you probably will hate me for it but it has to be said. <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_frown.gif">

2002-09-21 07:09

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Chicken

Thanks for the note...the girl\'s user name is \"ginsdance\" if you want to go check her stuff out....w/b soon

2002-09-22 08:22

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Frank_Williams

Hey i read your comment on my poem and i just wanna tell you something. America didn\'t come together when MLK was assassinated and not everyone even cared about him. And it took at least 20 years or more for his birthday to be celebrated as a national holiday. So when i say something in my poems i at least know a little something about what i\'m talking about. And the next time you try to tell someone about reading up on history, you should do it first. And why should i be patriotic if i don\'t want to? There\'re to many things wrong in this country to walk around waving a flag like there isn\'t. And I\'m not saying I wanna live in any other country, I\'m just saying what I want to because i do live in this country and I\'m free to say it.

2002-09-22 13:44

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Frank_Williams

Hmmm..nobody asked you to be rude either. Yup we do have freedom of speech in this country but ya know...that whole amendment thing..it also tells you that what you say must not be in a sense to harm. Do you expect the United States to fly a flag absolutely every single time someone dies?? That\'s not the responsibility of the \'United States\'..it\'s our responsibility. And part of having the \'priveledge, and yes I said priveledge, of being an American is being patriotic. If you\'re not, what exactly is the point?? Hell look at Afghanistan for instance..do you think they fly a flag over there for all the deaths?? I gaurentee you they don\'t...The idea of being patriotic is something we as Americans do to honor the people we loved and looked up to. And to be quite honest..I am getting rather tired of hearing about everything that happened in the past. I didn\'t do it...you didn\'t do it...so let it all lie. If MLK didn\'t get a flag raised at his death...that is not my nor your fault. If I had been alive then..who knows..maybe I would have rose the flag for him by myself. He was an honorable man. But you can\'t change the past..all you can do is affect what goes on in the future. And if you run around saying who cares all the time..well you know what..know one will care..and where\'s that gonna get us??

2002-09-24 08:05

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Ophelia

Sorry if you feel that I offended you with my comment. But i do not see where it was offensive. By telling you that no one is better off dead...I was also letting you know that that included you. That your life is worth living for..worth striving for. Everyone is loved by someone, with someone, for someone. Sorry if you understood wrong...

2002-09-24 08:08

1403

thank you for the comment on my poem, i hope your never on the end of that again like in my poem, thanks again

2002-09-24 09:13

1405

regarding my poem called should have, yes i do have hostility built up, but my heart aches for this man whom ive come to care so much for and yet he has almost vanished without a trace and i do not know if he is okay or even alive, but thank you for the comment, maybe my answers will come soon <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cry.gif">

2002-09-24 09:18

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Butterat_Zool

Just thought that i would point something out to ya about my poem \"Strip club.\" In your comment, you said that money wasn\'t all that mattered and that self-pride and all that was worth more. I just wanted to point out that that was exactly the message that the poem was meant to convey. I\'m not a stripper by any means, but a college man. This was just about one of those horrid aspects of life that a person sees, and can never un-see... Something so awful that it is just burned into your memory forever. that\'s all. Thank you for the comment though. It just seemed like you thought I was the stripper. I hope you have a nice day and a good rest of your life. Sincerely, Butterat Zool.

2002-09-24 16:07

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Butterat_Zool

I think I caught myself giggling at myself. You see... a lot of times I come on here and just start reading one poem right after the next without even looking to see who wrote them...I just read and comment and keep moving. Guess maybe I get too involved in it?? But thank you for clearing it up for me. Have a good day : ) Lia

2002-09-24 22:26

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Dot

Jeff_Scott_Morehead

Hi Jeff Morehead, thank you for the kind words about my poem-Tuesday\'s Tears. I just read your poem-Memories- how touching. Dottie <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_cry.gif">

2002-09-25 00:17

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AnnD

Hiya Jenni, Thankyou so much for yur lovely comment on my poem....he he.......i\'m not saying tht some fella pi***ed me off or anything.....but this was the result.LOL Its good to hear from you.Hope you and yours are well....Take good care of yourself. Ann

2002-09-25 03:12

1411

artwitness

Thanks for your comment. I didn\'t think anyone would pick up on the idea of the flawed narrator.

2002-09-26 05:20

1413

viola

zer0

how do you say this without sounding like a freaky stalker... you\'re morbid and spooky...and I love it!!!!!!!

2002-09-26 23:17

1414

sunshinegirl

Thanks for all your comments. You really have a way with words. You are very talented and I appreciate all the advice you have given! Your poems are very heartfelt and beautiful so keep writing! I know everything will work out in the end....it just has to be the right time!! <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-09-27 06:29

1415

nebill

Just wanted to thank you for your comment on my poem. Hard to explain how we give objects personality traits, but my bikes rock! Thanks again. Bill

2002-09-27 21:50

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juliette

Damon_Maynard

I just read your version of my poem and it is amazing to me what you pulled from this. It\'s like you read between the lines and said all the things I was trying to say. As different as the two poems appear, they are so very alike. I wrote this poem about an abusive relationship that only ended when my husband was sentenced to 49 1/2 years in prison. I referred to myself as his \"prisoner\" because I have moved on with my life now and I\'m fine - so long as I can write about him every now and then. Thank you so much for your poem. I think you are a wonderful poet - you made me cry......just like Byron......giggle,giggle. Take care- Juliette <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-09-28 17:50

1420

R_G_Love

thank you for the comment on my poem too many sleepless nights, im glad you liked it

2002-10-01 08:09

1421

thank you for the comment on too many sleepless nights, i too hope they improve

2002-10-01 08:10

1423

Dot

Dot, thanks for the beautiful poem, if you ever go on the old sight, please read An Unforgettable journey, it is a true story, happened to me when I was seventeen, I understand God alot, I have a reason to be here, I know I will see her again, sending hugs to you from miles away, <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-01 11:07

1424

darkkai

hello chatabox i see that u have read my poem \"Bato\'ora Jaispi\" it is clear as day to understand well \"life finds a light\" (it means a sweat lodge. \" I inhale death like there is no tomorrow\" it means that I, myself, am consumed with hatred and anger. \"What is, is.\" i live by that moto \'cos i live day by day. \" The night is like a vast conspiracy to dream\"--What will we see in the bowels of the night, meaning dreams come in strange froms. I\'m an intuitive psychic, something i don\'t brag about. \"Look at the pregnet yack and wonder.... will you be there for dessert?\" i was had given flesh offerings during my last Sun Dance i participated in. I hope this gives u a bit more understanding. sorry to confuse you. ;-)

2002-10-03 13:33

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Nani

sunshinegirl

thank you very much for taking the time to read my poem your comment is indeed very much appreciated <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-03 14:10

1428

Woody

PrEtTy-PlEaSe

Thanks for your kind comments, you will find a few more of my pems on this site, just look for Woody

2002-10-07 00:03

1429

Woody

Hey it\'s nice to know my poems have an effect on people, most of the stuff I write has a habit of making people cry. Thanks for your comments. Woody

2002-10-07 00:10

1430

matlock

CARAAAAA

Thank you for your comment. It seems not many people vote or leave a comment. It is nice to know that our words our affecting someone Rich

2002-10-08 05:01

1431

Cedric_Napti_Walters

Rose

HI Rose, I hear you loud and clear don\'t give up and dont give in and just maybe you will have enough resources to return to your country gal roots. one love cedric napti walters <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-09 10:09

1432

Vampy

Thank you for giving me some feedback, I appreciate it... <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_eek.gif">)

2002-10-10 06:48

1433

Why only half the face? Your website has a really nice photo of you but cut down the middle... too bad. In any case thanx for the kind comments and keep up the good work yourself.

2002-10-10 07:31

1434

Ignore my last message... I full screened the browser and tada... Like magic blue border on left was replaced by other half of photo.... Sometimes I think I\'m on cruise control...

2002-10-10 07:33

1435

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif"> Lia, you take things to serious, I was only teasing Nebill, he had a great write, don\'t worry, you\'re one of my favorites too, LOL

2002-10-10 14:12

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[quote] On 2002-09-24 08:09, Lia wrote: Oh my...I just now found this Private message....and you don\'t have to thank me. I thank you for allowing me to read your work...you write beautifully <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> [/quote] Sorry for the late reply I just found this myself.... Thanx.

2002-10-11 06:42

1437

Cedric_Napti_Walters

[quote] On 2002-10-05 10:48, cedric napti walters wrote: I thank you for your response and kind words about my poem. Never allow anyone to define, redefine or in any way be little your worth as a child of the universe. stay strong yours poetically napti [/quote] Thank-you and sorry for the late reply. I just discovered this private message area...

2002-10-11 06:43

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[quote] On 2002-09-21 03:09, Valerie Pearson wrote: [quote] On 2002-09-18 07:37, WordPoet wrote: Re: The Dance (Score: 1) by Valerie Pearson on Wednesday, September 18 @ 07:23:21 EDT (User Info | Send a Message) how sweet, she must of been someone very dear, (possibly wallpaper, just kidding, another great write) Someone very dear... (Don\'t have enough for wallpaper...yet.) <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif\"> [/quote] <IMG SRC=\"images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif\"> thanks, made me smile when I felt so down [/quote] Anytime... Sorry to hear you were feeling down and sorry it took me so long to respond... I just discovered this private message area and didn\'t know I had any... L8r.

2002-10-11 06:45

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Emmie74

No, Greg doesn\'t bring me my only joy. Your comment upset for 2 reasons: That, and apparently YOU know how it feels to have a guy bring you your only joy. That\'s just great. me.

2002-10-11 08:19

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femme_fatale

amos

<IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_confused.gif"> okay u pm me and i reply but then u stop....hmmm...i wonder what that could mean? <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-10-11 23:54

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Vampy

BluGurl6

Thanks for leaving me feedback on my poem, \"One Wish\"... I appreciate it <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_smile.gif">

2002-10-12 09:21

1445

Nani

LOWMAN613

thank you for your comment on my write very much appreciated

2002-10-17 16:21

1446

sissy

doc

i did not get anything from you, sorry if i caused trouble

2002-10-19 03:20

1447

aubz_09

S_K_Williamson

Hey thanx for the comment , that was really nice

2002-10-19 15:55

1448

aubz_09

thanx for your comment that was really nice

2002-10-19 15:55

1449

Knowledge

Blue

Hey, this is Knowledge. We SHOULD talk. Maybe you\'ll see things as I do. My MSN Messenger is <a href="mailto:knowledgeseeker22@hotmail.com">knowledgeseeker22@hotmail.com</a> <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_biggrin.gif">

2002-10-19 23:45

1450

Jenni just wanted to thank you for the warm comments. They are much appreciated and needed right now. It seems like I start to get a grasp of things and then something happens to send them haywire again. By the by hope things are well with you. Once again thank you. Lasca

2002-10-20 17:53

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lil_angel

alas, i\'m now in oshawa...but i did live in saskatchewan, and moose factory for over twenty years. Cold like that was tough to handle sometimes but if it didn\'t kill you outright it was both invigorating and habit forming

2002-10-22 03:43

1453

OysterMoon

viola

Thank you Viola for such kind words! blessings, oyster moon

2002-10-22 05:09

1454

OysterMoon

Thank you Lia for such kind words... it is good to hear from you. blessings, oyster moon <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_razz.gif">

2002-10-22 05:11

1455

Butterat_Zool

Thank you for your comment on my poem \"Godsrattle.\" I completely agree with you... The ending does need work. I was just trying to think of some reason for a person to be crying so much, trying to wrap the piece up, but i couldn\'t think of anything, so i stuck on the cheesy love ending as a temporary solution. Hopefully something better will come to me and i\'ll repost the peom with that ending. If you have any suggestions, please let me know. Again, thank you, and have a nice day. Butterat Zool.

2002-10-22 05:50

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uniquepoet33

nebill

just trying to keep it real thanks alot for the support <IMG SRC="images/forum/smilies/icon_wink.gif">

2002-10-22 07:10

1457

isaiyan

meg

thank you for your response to my poem. actually, i am over that asshole. it was a little venting that I had to do....

2002-10-22 09:22

1458

Rose

thanks for the comment on my poem -- I had not thought of it in terms of human nature but it clearly is there, isn\'t it? I\'ve been working on my 100 haiku project and in doing so I am coming to appreciate the haiku form. It is seemly so simple and delicate but it is so full of subtle possibilities . . . thanks again, aern+

2002-10-22 12:25

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viola

RANE

I\'m glad to have someone who can relate to these emotions, but sad also. I hope everything works out for you, I truley do.

2002-10-23 22:50

1460

Lovingangel4u

Fwog

Thank you for your lovely comment. Take Care, Carmen.

2002-10-27 08:59

1461

thank you for the comment on cowboy, it does sound like a song huh? maybe one day my cowboy will sing it for me

2002-10-28 07:28

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