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Tearing at my face
Hands like a claw
Cutting into my eyes
Drowning them in pools
Of clear water

I cant take this anymore
I've already been torn apart
Now I know the real reason,
Its all my fault

Burning..
Your lies..
Killed me, Finally.
Inside.

Just to destroy this body
Use my skin as paper
And a blade for a pencil
Slowly I'll compose my death note.

And my site will go black
Crimson will stain me
As I grab my chest
Then regret what I've done
As my skin grows pale and cold
And my life is pulled under
Burning...

Copyright ©2005
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Paper Skin

Contributed by icequeenelle13 on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:10:48 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Paper Skin-Elle. Yates

Tearing at my face
Hands like a claw
Cutting into my eyes
Drowning them in pools
Of clear water

I cant take this anymore
I've already been torn apart
Now I know the real reason,
Its all my fault

Burning..
Your lies..
Killed me, Finally.
Inside.

Just to destroy this body
Use my skin as paper
And a blade for a pencil
Slowly I'll compose my death note.

And my site will go black
Crimson will stain me
As I grab my chest
Then regret what I've done
As my skin grows pale and cold
And my life is pulled under
Burning...

Copyright ©2005

Copyright © icequeenelle13 ... [ 2005-07-03 22:10:48]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Paper Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Xxluckie_lynnxX on Sunday, 3rd July 2005 @ 10:54:24 PM AEST
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whoa .. nicely written .. i hope you actually d ont do this to yourself but you did make a killer poem! nice job!

Re: Paper Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 4th July 2005 @ 12:52:58 AM AEST
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Very raw. but i like it.

I liked the metaphor you used, your body being the paper and the blade as your pencil. That's powerful.

Well done, all my hope to you.

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