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Array ( [sid] => 100154 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => 4th of july on the ohio riverside [time] => 2005-07-05 03:01:22 [hometext] => this is a happy one for me, to all those who sent love when i was hurting, thank you, i was busted by my long time secret love, and we are now a couple [bodytext] => sitting on the riverside
my fear has no place to hide
in your eyes i cannot see
but do you understand me
you broke my silence of my love
spoke out of my fear you
busted me dead square in the eyes
not with meanness or lies
just told my secret for all to hear
my fear you ripped away
when you asked me to stay
you wanted to make love to me that night
would you hold me tight,
i don't know i didn't stay
but leaves me hope for another day,
my love was shown
on the fourth of july down by the riverside [comments] => 3 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 33 [informant] => brokenwings [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

4th of july on the ohio riverside

Contributed by brokenwings on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 03:01:22 AM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

sitting on the riverside
my fear has no place to hide
in your eyes i cannot see
but do you understand me
you broke my silence of my love
spoke out of my fear you
busted me dead square in the eyes
not with meanness or lies
just told my secret for all to hear
my fear you ripped away
when you asked me to stay
you wanted to make love to me that night
would you hold me tight,
i don't know i didn't stay
but leaves me hope for another day,
my love was shown
on the fourth of july down by the riverside

Copyright © brokenwings ... [ 2005-07-05 03:01:22]
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Re: 4th of july on the ohio riverside (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 11:44:04 AM AEST
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sounds like you had a wonderful fourth nice write by the way
Michelle

Re: 4th of july on the ohio riverside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:00:06 PM AEST
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Find a real man
It sounds like young love
to me
If you really want to see if he loves
you don't give him any for months
keep your prize to yourself
and see if he wraps up and leaves
And if he ever asked what would you do
if he cheated on you leave em
because he already did trust me

Re: 4th of july on the ohio riverside (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 7th October 2005 @ 04:13:26 PM AEST
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Very, very intense and revealing about fear coming out of the closet.

What would be so terrifying, being in love if the two are a man and a woman.

Raquel Leah :D

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