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Array ( [sid] => 100165 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cemetery Angel [time] => 2005-07-05 08:30:19 [hometext] => All in never quite as it appears... [bodytext] => I sit alone on this dark night
I watch the half moon make shadows with its light
I feel the rain heavy in the air
I wait for it, silent, without care
I feel the first drop as it tumbles down my cheek
and I wait for the others to start to streak
My warmth cools as they fall down,
though most of them hit ground

I stand there a solitary figure out in the rain
all alone, and no one sees my pain
When tomorrow comes and people see me again,
no one will notice my strain

Because I am nothing to them
Just another weathered statue
Watching, waiting
With unchanging face
Praying, protecting
Solitary in my grace
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Cemetery Angel

Contributed by SirensLight on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 08:30:19 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

I sit alone on this dark night
I watch the half moon make shadows with its light
I feel the rain heavy in the air
I wait for it, silent, without care
I feel the first drop as it tumbles down my cheek
and I wait for the others to start to streak
My warmth cools as they fall down,
though most of them hit ground

I stand there a solitary figure out in the rain
all alone, and no one sees my pain
When tomorrow comes and people see me again,
no one will notice my strain

Because I am nothing to them
Just another weathered statue
Watching, waiting
With unchanging face
Praying, protecting
Solitary in my grace

Copyright © SirensLight ... [ 2005-07-05 08:30:19]
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Re: Cemetery Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by bgj on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:07:40 AM AEST
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Not bad. Keep writing.
bgj

Re: Cemetery Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:31:25 AM AEST
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good write.
well exicuted.
i really liked th second to last stanza.
no one ever notices anyones strian.

peach

Re: Cemetery Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:29:07 AM AEST
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That was very good. I really felt your emotions. I've felt like that before, I'm sure most of us have. Great job capturing the moment and how you felt. I'm sorry you feel like that.

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