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Array ( [sid] => 100211 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Golden Key [time] => 2005-07-05 16:19:52 [hometext] => Part Two [bodytext] => She sits and waits so patiently
Then falls asleep beneath the tree
She dreams of journey to partake
And then she jumps up wide awake

The air is dark, the air is still
Radiant moonbeams, light does spill
on the ground, awaiting there
With the lady, oh, so fair

In the beam, what does she see?
A glittering jewel, a golden key
What is this, is this for me?
Why does it shine so brilliantly?

She gently kneels upon the ground
And looks at this small thing she's found
where is the lock, where does it hide?
The place where golden key will slide

The quiet voice sings out once more
Just look and you will see the door
Hurry then and you will see
Enchanted passage in the tree
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The Golden Key

Contributed by gwenevere on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:19:52 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

She sits and waits so patiently
Then falls asleep beneath the tree
She dreams of journey to partake
And then she jumps up wide awake

The air is dark, the air is still
Radiant moonbeams, light does spill
on the ground, awaiting there
With the lady, oh, so fair

In the beam, what does she see?
A glittering jewel, a golden key
What is this, is this for me?
Why does it shine so brilliantly?

She gently kneels upon the ground
And looks at this small thing she's found
where is the lock, where does it hide?
The place where golden key will slide

The quiet voice sings out once more
Just look and you will see the door
Hurry then and you will see
Enchanted passage in the tree

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-05 16:19:52]
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Re: The Golden Key (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 04:43:18 PM AEST
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enchanting poetry. its like a sweet dream of engaging mystery. great job.

Re: The Golden Key (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 05:49:49 PM AEST
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my hat's off to you, gwen. this is really excellent.
sounds very magical, and so easy to visualize.

wizard

Re: The Golden Key (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:45:07 PM AEST
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What an amazing mysterious story thus far Ros..

Off to three-

B

Re: The Golden Key (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:31:10 PM AEST
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Cool... this whole thing is surprising to me eventhough I already know the ending. Seriously... this is a great write and full of excitement. You have such a great gift of rhyming "intelligently". I have never seen better rhymes...
Jodi

Re: The Golden Key (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 09:58:47 PM AEST
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OMG I am so loving this have to read part 3 Your rhyming as well as your flow is perfect your imagery is perfect I love the mystery you are persenting such enchantment in this so now I go to read the 3rd part I love it
Cathy

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