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Array ( [sid] => 100241 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => hurt of child [time] => 2005-07-05 21:30:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => earsplitting laughter
breaks throught the air
runs through the crowd
tears streaming through

breaking in doorways
they all stop and stare
and she slams through the room
and hides in her cube

so many problems
what answer is this
to run in and hide
forever amiss

she trys oh so hard
but life keeps beating her down
pushes her in
and suffacates her sound

fallen so deep
she can no longer sleep
tearing at soul
she can no longer breathe

hears in her head
that its better to stop
shes tried so hard
not to cut her wrist

such emotions
are so stong
they suck her in
where she doesn't belong

they overpower wat actions she takes
as she reaches for those golden gates
reached with rusty iron cates
driven to by childish bates

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 36 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

hurt of child

Contributed by spazz911 on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:30:20 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

earsplitting laughter
breaks throught the air
runs through the crowd
tears streaming through

breaking in doorways
they all stop and stare
and she slams through the room
and hides in her cube

so many problems
what answer is this
to run in and hide
forever amiss

she trys oh so hard
but life keeps beating her down
pushes her in
and suffacates her sound

fallen so deep
she can no longer sleep
tearing at soul
she can no longer breathe

hears in her head
that its better to stop
shes tried so hard
not to cut her wrist

such emotions
are so stong
they suck her in
where she doesn't belong

they overpower wat actions she takes
as she reaches for those golden gates
reached with rusty iron cates
driven to by childish bates

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-07-05 21:30:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: hurt of child (User Rating: 1 )
by demonika_911 on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:43:45 PM AEST
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I thought this was a really impacting poem, there are so many chicks out there who feel like this. Good on ya, keep up the great poetry!

Re: hurt of child (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 5th July 2005 @ 09:58:32 PM AEST
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Very well written indeed.

Heart-wrenching and tragic. You potrayed your emotions well.

Hope to you.

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