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Awakens from uneasy sleep
He hears the lady laugh with glee
AHA!!!! he thinks, it's time for tea

He slides along, then starts to climb
He leaves behind a greenie slime
The lady moves without a care
She does not know he's waiting there

She sings a song of sheer delight
Quite unaware of her sad plight
Around the corner, tries to hide
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The Monster

Contributed by gwenevere on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:10:26 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

The monster in the cavern deep
Awakens from uneasy sleep
He hears the lady laugh with glee
AHA!!!! he thinks, it's time for tea

He slides along, then starts to climb
He leaves behind a greenie slime
The lady moves without a care
She does not know he's waiting there

She sings a song of sheer delight
Quite unaware of her sad plight
Around the corner, tries to hide
He sits and waits, mouth open wide

Copyright © gwenevere ... [ 2005-07-06 02:10:26]
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Re: The Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:44:49 AM AEST
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M y dear you have a vivid imagination, Have you written short stories for children perhaps? If not I would do so you have great talent as this your poem shows. Keep smiling not from bernard.

Re: The Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by boobiepeach on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:06:47 PM AEST
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great talent you have there. i to love writing things like this especially when there is symbolism behind the story/
keep it up.

peach

Re: The Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 01:14:13 PM AEST
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Very cute. You have a good imagination. I used to like to write stories like that. Very interesting. Good job!

Re: The Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:25:10 PM AEST
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I haven't read the other three parts, but I have read four and five. I like what someone said above about you writing short stories for kids. This is very interesting and I know that many small children would enjoy a book like this so much. I am interested too... keep this up...
Jodi

Re: The Monster (User Rating: 1 )
by mom11159 on Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 08:23:20 AM AEST
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this is like watching a series on tv watiting in antisipation for the next episode as I am doing for part 5 loved all of the parts your very very talented
cathy

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