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Array ( [sid] => 100312 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ''Fallen'' [time] => 2005-07-06 12:52:34 [hometext] => I truly love someone...and it's more than I can take. She chose to walk away for others, sake.............. [bodytext] => "FALLEN"

Reaching heights, spoken of in lore...
Visions of heaven, I haven't seen before...

The ascension is rapid, to levels unknown...
Falling just short, of seeing God's throne...

Living in a moment, within a moment...
Past failures justified, a welcome atonement...

Flight by my own sheer will, a sensation new to me...
The eternal war ceases, weight has overcome gravity...

Scorching the heavens, with a trail of flame...
My senses revived, never more will I be the same...

The the hand I held, slips through my grasp...
Pain becomes my company, like venom from an asp...

A heaviness, fills my every pore...
I see things, I saw once before...

The descent, racing at speeds untold...
Imaginary wings, begin to fold...

On impact, is born an epic explosion...
The remains are subject, to timeless erosion...

What rises from the ashes, God is callin'...
The transformation has begun, for I have fallen... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 22 [informant] => DAVIS [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
''Fallen''

Contributed by DAVIS on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:52:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



"FALLEN"

Reaching heights, spoken of in lore...
Visions of heaven, I haven't seen before...

The ascension is rapid, to levels unknown...
Falling just short, of seeing God's throne...

Living in a moment, within a moment...
Past failures justified, a welcome atonement...

Flight by my own sheer will, a sensation new to me...
The eternal war ceases, weight has overcome gravity...

Scorching the heavens, with a trail of flame...
My senses revived, never more will I be the same...

The the hand I held, slips through my grasp...
Pain becomes my company, like venom from an asp...

A heaviness, fills my every pore...
I see things, I saw once before...

The descent, racing at speeds untold...
Imaginary wings, begin to fold...

On impact, is born an epic explosion...
The remains are subject, to timeless erosion...

What rises from the ashes, God is callin'...
The transformation has begun, for I have fallen...




Copyright © DAVIS ... [ 2005-07-06 12:52:34]
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Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 12:56:11 PM AEST
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very lovely write so rich with emotion and it flows nicely
Michelle


Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:06:01 PM AEST
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Nice poem i liked it...

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Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Dri on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 02:45:01 PM AEST
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the meter feels a bit stretched in a few places, but other than that, very good.


Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Justintears on Wednesday, 6th July 2005 @ 07:39:47 PM AEST
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well written and highly emotional. nice-


Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:23:02 AM AEST
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I really am sorry you have to go through all this. But that makes us into a better person. So keep your chin up.

Love the poem by the way. Keep them comming.

Jane xxx


Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 12:23:01 PM AEST
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Great job. I love the emotion and expression. You really care for this person and it shows. Welcome to YPDC!


Re: ''Fallen'' (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 05:54:29 PM AEST
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I agree with all of the above.
mary




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