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Array ( [sid] => 100398 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => just thoughts swiming in my head [time] => 2005-07-07 01:19:05 [hometext] => [bodytext] => overrated love

underrated trust

things start out so innocent

but continue out of lust

you over look certain things

you otherwise would see

but nothing seems to matter when they are alone with me

and when they leave you are so lonely

wishing they were there to hold me

wanting to give up and move on

but never doing so

im too far gone

i mean well in the things i do and say

but breaking the habit is not an easy play

half of me wants to give

the other half get

but mostly all i want is to say ***** it and forget

never knowing up or down

just cant ever remove the frown

wanting something to be real

needing to express how i feel

falling in the same black hole

letting anger take control

losing out on what i won

starting over when i just begun

confuseing one thing for another

wanting to run and take cover

opening up to be hurt

feeling like the queen of dirt

needing something to be real

one day ill learn how to deal

never my heart will they steal

[comments] => 4 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 40 [informant] => candi [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => fantasy )
just thoughts swiming in my head

Contributed by candi on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 01:19:05 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



overrated love

underrated trust

things start out so innocent

but continue out of lust

you over look certain things

you otherwise would see

but nothing seems to matter when they are alone with me

and when they leave you are so lonely

wishing they were there to hold me

wanting to give up and move on

but never doing so

im too far gone

i mean well in the things i do and say

but breaking the habit is not an easy play

half of me wants to give

the other half get

but mostly all i want is to say ***** it and forget

never knowing up or down

just cant ever remove the frown

wanting something to be real

needing to express how i feel

falling in the same black hole

letting anger take control

losing out on what i won

starting over when i just begun

confuseing one thing for another

wanting to run and take cover

opening up to be hurt

feeling like the queen of dirt

needing something to be real

one day ill learn how to deal

never my heart will they steal





Copyright © candi ... [ 2005-07-07 01:19:05]
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Re: just thoughts swiming in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Sahara on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 04:00:04 AM AEST
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Very amazing for simple thoughts swimming about, sums up the way so many feel.

Great write

Sonya


Re: just thoughts swiming in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by AmyLee4Ever on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 06:22:20 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful write, but I am not sure if it is fantasy. Many think like this and it isn't exactly fantasy... it's true feelings. Many feel like this, and great job of describing that...
Jodi


Re: just thoughts swiming in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by Candi on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 01:09:13 AM AEST
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the fantasy part was an accident,

its actually supposed to be under the general poetry topic. lol. sorry for the mix up.


Re: just thoughts swiming in my head (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Saturday, 1st April 2006 @ 08:08:50 PM AEST
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Great write!
God Bless!




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