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Couch critters
Contributed by
wordsy
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Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Down in the cracks where the old crumbs go Down in the shadows where the lights don't show
In between the cushions and under them too You wouldn't believe what's hidden from view
A strange little world all to it's own unlike any other that's ever been known
A world of wonder Where lintpickers play And crumb crunchers gather and grumble all day
A place where fuzzies and frizzies hang out With dust bunnies scurring and hiding about
And way down under far, far below Down where the fuzzies and frizzies won't go
Down in the bottom of the old gray couch The crack monster lives and boy what a grouch
He growls and he grumbles He moans and he groans He munches and crunches and gnaws at old combs
He spits and he sputters And rumbles all day And frightens the fuzzies and frizzies away
So if you ever go digging down deep in the couch You'd better watch out For the crack monster grouch
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 07:58:26 AM AEST (User
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This is really cute :) |
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:50:11 AM AEST (User
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very good i will read this one to my grandson i really enjoyed it |
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 08:53:34 AM AEST (User
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Dearest Wordsy @=>>=
Rofl!! This is Great!! Brought a huge smile to my face! Sooo cute I'm betting you both had a wonderful chuckle hehe
Hugs always Nessa
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fwog on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 09:24:56 AM AEST (User
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I love it, love it ,love it.
This is a wonderful write, and oh what a journey.
This is like Hobbitt country.
Thank you for this I just bet your little one loved it. |
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 10:03:25 AM AEST (User
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Awww this is so cute hehe...and it's soooo true those lil monster grouches underneath tha old gray couches can be quite frightening lmao....thanks for sharing this one wordsy ...
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Re: Couch critters
(User Rating: 1 ) by roisin on
Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 10:10:27 PM AEST (User
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hope it's okay with you that I bring this poem along with me to school next week...the children will get such a giggle from it...and it's a good one to do finger plays with, I'm thinking!!! it will be great fun!!!...rosie |
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