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[aid] => mick
[title] => Reflecting
[time] => 2005-07-07 19:23:18
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[bodytext] => The dusky hours
like birds flew by,
as lightly and as free..
Ten thousand stars
were in the sky,
ten thousand on the sea..
And every wave
with rippled face
that leapt upon the air
had caught a star
in its embrace
its beauty in each single place
and held it trembling there.
B
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[topic] => 43
[informant] => Man_On_High
[notes] => (Poem edited by Mod_11)
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Reflecting
Contributed by
Man_On_High
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:23:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The dusky hours
like birds flew by,
as lightly and as free..
Ten thousand stars
were in the sky,
ten thousand on the sea..
And every wave
with rippled face
that leapt upon the air
had caught a star
in its embrace
its beauty in each single place
and held it trembling there.
B
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Re: Reflecting
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:39:51 PM AEST
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hey long time no see on
great write does not disappoint |
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Re: Reflecting
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by hauntedscorp on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:51:49 PM AEST
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What a serene visual...How very poetic : )
I really enjoyed this write. Nicely done!
Scorp. |
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Re: Reflecting
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by wizard on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 07:54:52 PM AEST
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i am speechless from your genius...another perfect write.
wizard |
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Re: Reflecting
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by brew on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:09:51 PM AEST
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Breathless...............what a hold for a light to see.....always a great write.
Brew~ |
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Re: Reflecting
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:58:58 PM AEST
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What a beautiful picture you have painted here...
This is absolutely amazing....
Jenni |
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Re: Reflecting
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:14:26 PM AEST
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Magical write indeed.
Every poem of yours is profound Bily.
Arrr how do you write so well....ur awesome! |
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Re: Reflecting
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:07:31 PM AEST
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I can visualize this. It gives an ethereal feeling. Beauty reflecting beauty. Amazing.
Rita |
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Re: Reflecting
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by CarolinaBlue on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 11:56:31 PM AEST
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this moment you captured was pure perfection! Truly beautiful, which can be said about all of your writes!
~Blue~
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Re: Reflecting
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 06:53:00 AM AEST
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wow thats all i could think
when i was done reading
the second stanaz very very good
great job
5 for you |
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Re: Reflecting
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:19:18 AM AEST
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Simply beautiful in it's simplicity, but please tell me bill, the mod's aren't getting on your case 2, what could u possibly write that
would need editing, who will they go after next? Walt Disnet? lovely write as usual . . .
Ben |
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Re: Reflecting
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 07:43:58 PM AEST
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As always Billy this is written so beauitfully and so well. You capture your subject so well. Your unqiue style in writing shows off your talent and ability to produce such remarkable writes. well done.
hugs,
Dreamer |
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Re: Reflecting
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by Essentially9 on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 12:35:37 AM AEST
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| excellent, i really liked this piece. its good to be reading good poetry again. thats been lacking for a while. very well done. |
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Re: Reflecting
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 22nd September 2006 @ 06:28:37 PM AEST
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Sweetest heart,
this may sound odd, but I think you should have posted this as
"love or romantic poetry". Just, wow. It is so completely beautiful
and romantic, darling, that it has moved me to tears. ~ truly
I was swept away by the metaphor alone, but the rhyming and
the flow was masterful. (To say the very least). Oh my, there
is so much in here. Much more than the words themselves.
I would, if I could, place two souls in this piece. One, a star,
and the other, a wave- each holding onto the other .. trembling
in utter and complete, beautiful reflection.
oh gosh .. *sigh sigh sigh*
Too beautiful. Too magnificent, for words, my love.
~Breezy
XoX
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