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Array ( [sid] => 100491 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Untitled [time] => 2005-07-07 20:40:32 [hometext] => A sorta song about being drugged up and confused. It just goes on and on...the way the song sounds. [bodytext] => Here I am again
On the floor again
I did more again
I think I'm dead again.
I wanna cry today
But I can't give it away.
I don't want my life today
It just won't go away.

Don't let me cry again
I want to try again
To make this good again
To help us out.
I feel like crap today
No need to go away
Cause it just ain't this day
That keeps me this way.

Please let me die again
Don't let me live again
This life is crap again
This heart is cold again.
I think I lost my way
I think you lost the day
But I can't waste away.
Cause I got nothing. to. pay.
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Untitled

Contributed by imagenuinefake on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:40:32 PM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

Here I am again
On the floor again
I did more again
I think I'm dead again.
I wanna cry today
But I can't give it away.
I don't want my life today
It just won't go away.

Don't let me cry again
I want to try again
To make this good again
To help us out.
I feel like crap today
No need to go away
Cause it just ain't this day
That keeps me this way.

Please let me die again
Don't let me live again
This life is crap again
This heart is cold again.
I think I lost my way
I think you lost the day
But I can't waste away.
Cause I got nothing. to. pay.

Copyright © imagenuinefake ... [ 2005-07-07 20:40:32]
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Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:18:38 PM AEST
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Hey, i really liked the repetative of this poem. Very strong and to the point. Im a huge rock music fan...this kind of reminds me of Korn material. Actually,it seems like something they would do a lot. In fact, im gonna go get Jon Davis on the phone right now and hook this deal up. lol
Good job. *thumbs up*

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Inevitable on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:49:21 PM AEST
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Weird song but hott nonetheless

Re: Untitled (User Rating: 1 )
by Alina on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:14:49 PM AEST
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GREAT! Straight forward and to the point!!! And yeah, it could be a good rock song...but not Korn, they suck...this sounds like it could be more of a Red Hot Chili Peppers song....kinda reminded me of their song called "Under the Bridge". Anyways, KUDOS to you....
ALINA

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