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Array ( [sid] => 100501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dark Angels Song [time] => 2005-07-07 22:19:39 [hometext] => you can't hear them but they are there.......................plz comment [bodytext] => Invisable
Angels of death
Crawl from beneath
And suck all our breaths
Who would stop the beauty above
From showing the shallow
And the darkness of love

Cold dark breaths
Are drawn from the deep
Many long night
Alone and asleep
Spending such dreams
On willowing reaps

A tune haunts the darkness
Sung by a thousand cries
Float the air
Sad lullabies
Drifted by breezes
Haunted by winds

Sing those same songs
And the dead come back again
To peer through the evil
That they once inspired
And tear through the hopes
By those they entired

Cold heated sweats
Ranking in sleep
Split through the air
Confusing our heartbeats
To awaken the devils
And perish those keeps

Murdered angels
Done wrong by the light
Switching to darkness
And coming on frights
Terrorizing eagles
Soaring on bloody wings

Splattering mist
A hazy sea of red
Across the world
Where the people have tread
Covering the ground
And hating the rest

Who has deserved
The punish they bring
Screaming their pain
On a victim of time
Towering over
Line after line
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Dark Angels Song

Contributed by spazz911 on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:19:39 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Invisable
Angels of death
Crawl from beneath
And suck all our breaths
Who would stop the beauty above
From showing the shallow
And the darkness of love

Cold dark breaths
Are drawn from the deep
Many long night
Alone and asleep
Spending such dreams
On willowing reaps

A tune haunts the darkness
Sung by a thousand cries
Float the air
Sad lullabies
Drifted by breezes
Haunted by winds

Sing those same songs
And the dead come back again
To peer through the evil
That they once inspired
And tear through the hopes
By those they entired

Cold heated sweats
Ranking in sleep
Split through the air
Confusing our heartbeats
To awaken the devils
And perish those keeps

Murdered angels
Done wrong by the light
Switching to darkness
And coming on frights
Terrorizing eagles
Soaring on bloody wings

Splattering mist
A hazy sea of red
Across the world
Where the people have tread
Covering the ground
And hating the rest

Who has deserved
The punish they bring
Screaming their pain
On a victim of time
Towering over
Line after line




Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-07-07 22:19:39]
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Re: Dark Angels Song (User Rating: 1 )
by Unbreakable on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 05:53:27 PM AEST
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Very well written! I liked this alot...the rhythm was perfect, it flowed so well. And your choice of wording is great. Overall great write, keep it up!

Krystal


Re: Dark Angels Song (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 08:52:10 PM AEST
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great write, kc!! i luved it! it really did flow well and you had a good choice of words. and i liked the whole meaning behind it. kinda sad though! great write though, keep up the good work!!

~sprints




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