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Array ( [sid] => 10064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Mistake [time] => 2003-01-09 13:40:00 [hometext] => this is somthing that can all so often be stoped but no one bothers [bodytext] => As you silently cry
I try to hold back my gostly tears
i was to strong to die
dispite my many fears
you sit by my side
remembering the words you said
"Don't go you don't have permision"
but know there are four people dead
they only had one beer before the ride
i was too smart to listen
my disition put me here
now i am no longer alive
death was my biggest fear
i am so sorry for my masive mistake
mommy, daddy are you mad at me
when isaw the car it wasn't enough time to press on the break
don't ask god "how can it be" " god why me" ?
the day the party took place
i saw the vision of an angels face
she told me " everything will be fine"
that i would be in a better place
remember me when the stars shine [comments] => 5 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 39 [informant] => chantel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

The Mistake

Contributed by chantel on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

As you silently cry
I try to hold back my gostly tears
i was to strong to die
dispite my many fears
you sit by my side
remembering the words you said
"Don't go you don't have permision"
but know there are four people dead
they only had one beer before the ride
i was too smart to listen
my disition put me here
now i am no longer alive
death was my biggest fear
i am so sorry for my masive mistake
mommy, daddy are you mad at me
when isaw the car it wasn't enough time to press on the break
don't ask god "how can it be" " god why me" ?
the day the party took place
i saw the vision of an angels face
she told me " everything will be fine"
that i would be in a better place
remember me when the stars shine

Copyright © chantel ... [ 2003-01-09 13:40:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 01:43:44 PM AEST
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This is so sad, I had a friend that this happened to,I know the pain in this! Great write! Christina

Re: The Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 03:27:39 PM AEST
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very sad brought tears to my eyes lost a good friend because of that.

Re: The Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Thursday, 9th January 2003 @ 04:10:51 PM AEST
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Sad..and so touching... thanks for the message...
Jenni

Re: The Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 12:36:56 AM AEST
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Like all of your poetry I like it!
Always
Amy

Re: The Mistake (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:28:47 PM AEST
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One mistake is all it takes.

A very good read,
wordsy.

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