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Array ( [sid] => 100795 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As It Washes Over [time] => 2005-07-10 20:42:06 [hometext] => I drown... [bodytext] => As it washes over I cry,
As it washes over I die,
As it washes over I weep
As it washes over I sleep.

Sadness cascades over my world,
In my heart lays a black pearl,
Opening up to heartaches call,
Walking blindly into another fall.

The grip I had over reality has gone,
Swam away in a meaningless song,
Drifted along a careless stream,
Died silently with many a dream.

Everything I was has disappeared,
Swept away in my dying tear,
Floated off into a black cloud,
Screamed in my face, screamed out loud.

I become a slave in my land,
As my pain takes hold of my hand,
Willing me to let darkness prevail,
Hear me die as my soul sets sail.
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As It Washes Over

Contributed by pixie on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 08:42:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



As it washes over I cry,
As it washes over I die,
As it washes over I weep
As it washes over I sleep.

Sadness cascades over my world,
In my heart lays a black pearl,
Opening up to heartaches call,
Walking blindly into another fall.

The grip I had over reality has gone,
Swam away in a meaningless song,
Drifted along a careless stream,
Died silently with many a dream.

Everything I was has disappeared,
Swept away in my dying tear,
Floated off into a black cloud,
Screamed in my face, screamed out loud.

I become a slave in my land,
As my pain takes hold of my hand,
Willing me to let darkness prevail,
Hear me die as my soul sets sail.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-07-10 20:42:06]
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Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:04:47 PM AEST
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Wow I love how you did this
how if you read the 1st line then the first
stanza it goes together and the rest
do the same great job



Joey


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by StrwBrryStrBrst0225 on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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I love it.... i think this is the best type of poetry i have ever read, iono why but i love this poem but i think my poems are losing sumthin and iono wut that is, but yours are great ... and inspire me to keep trying so i'll keep at it and mayb i will love my poems as much as i loved this one

~~Muffin~~


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:19:53 PM AEST
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Oh wow Pix! You've outdone yourself yet again!! You weave a write so flawlessly...amazing...absolutely amazing showcase of emotions in this piece...Stunning.

Scorp.


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:50:03 PM AEST
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very well done. i enjoyed it immensely.

wizard


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:36:29 AM AEST
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i wrote a coment and it glitched so here i go again pix . . .

this poem has a centerness, as though it was pulling me in as i read it and had no will 2 rezist, u never loose it pix, and u never will
beautiful, and welcome back . . .

(((((((pixie))))))))

Ben


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:53:08 AM AEST
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awwww pixie girl.I so miss reading your poems.
once again you write an awsome poem.

love ya hugs


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:19:36 AM AEST
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what ever you write..it flows emotionally and beautifully..missed you friend.((hugs)) venkat


Re: As It Washes Over (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:50:52 PM AEST
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Aww Pixie..I loved this!!!
You are such a talented poetess... You never fail to impress your reader..
Hugs
Jenni




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