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I would shine my light on you

And leave so that you would be nourished by the rain

So I could come back and gaze upon your beauty

All I want is to see you in full bloom

When you would no longer be with a budded stem

I would always wonder if you would bloom just

For me so I would not have to share you with the moon

If I were the rain I would chose to fall on you

My beautiful flower I would want to give you life

And would want to forever

Caress and be inside you from bud to root

If I were a song bird you would be my song

You would be what you are now

The only thing beautiful in me

If I were the sword you would be the stone

The keeper of my heart my one and only home

If I were ever in need a miracle

You would be my angel

You would give me back my faith

You would be the reason for me to want to live

I want us to forever be connected

I would not be without you
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If I were, You would be

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 09:50:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I were the sun you would be the flower

I would shine my light on you

And leave so that you would be nourished by the rain

So I could come back and gaze upon your beauty

All I want is to see you in full bloom

When you would no longer be with a budded stem

I would always wonder if you would bloom just

For me so I would not have to share you with the moon

If I were the rain I would chose to fall on you

My beautiful flower I would want to give you life

And would want to forever

Caress and be inside you from bud to root

If I were a song bird you would be my song

You would be what you are now

The only thing beautiful in me

If I were the sword you would be the stone

The keeper of my heart my one and only home

If I were ever in need a miracle

You would be my angel

You would give me back my faith

You would be the reason for me to want to live

I want us to forever be connected

I would not be without you

Copyright © Doriens_Picture ... [ 2005-07-10 21:50:34]
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Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:18:34 AM AEST
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nice tribute well done dorien beautifly spoken . . .

Ben

Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 02:43:14 AM AEST
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Amazing.

Full of love.

Eloquent words dear john.

Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:00:16 AM AEST
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If you were a tree i would take shelter in your shade, and find safety within your high branches....a beautiful write babe. muaw

Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 03:02:40 AM AEST
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Your girl is fortunate to have u.
Such passion in your words just wipes away the cares of the day.
U have a heart, mind, body-n-soul bigger than Texas.
A masterpeice of beauty that only heaven could produce.
huggs,
emy

Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 12:25:05 PM AEST
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WOW!! Again, truly romantic. Very sweet poem.

Re: If I were, You would be (User Rating: 1 )
by SylviaWalters on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 02:50:39 AM AEST
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wow.... great... keep up the good work!

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