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Array ( [sid] => 100812 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sonnet #3 [time] => 2005-07-10 22:32:06 [hometext] => I apologize for my lack of posting much work in the last while. Personal stuff has been happening, and I haven't had much time to write. This is my first piece in a while, so I hope you all like it. [bodytext] => The distance grows in every way
Each moment that we are apart
I think about you every day
The girl enshrined within my heart

When you get hurt, I feel the pain
Our souls' connection true and strong
When you're not here, I feel the strain
Like half of myself, though live, is gone

The silence leaves my mind in doubt
About the way you truly feel
I fear I cannot live without
The love that makes my life seem real

I only hope that you still see
That you and I are meant to be [comments] => 5 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 48 [informant] => MrWrite [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Sonnet #3

Contributed by MrWrite on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:32:06 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

The distance grows in every way
Each moment that we are apart
I think about you every day
The girl enshrined within my heart

When you get hurt, I feel the pain
Our souls' connection true and strong
When you're not here, I feel the strain
Like half of myself, though live, is gone

The silence leaves my mind in doubt
About the way you truly feel
I fear I cannot live without
The love that makes my life seem real

I only hope that you still see
That you and I are meant to be

Copyright © MrWrite ... [ 2005-07-10 22:32:06]
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Re: Sonnet #3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:39:40 PM AEST
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An amazing sonnet in that the flow was undisturbed..

your longing is very evident..
great discipline.. and write.

M.O.H.

Re: Sonnet #3 (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:42:14 PM AEST
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Beautiful.

I especially liked the first stanza, really drew me in.

A write from the heart indeed.

Well done to you.

Re: Sonnet #3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Elizabeth_Dandy on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 11:21:01 PM AEST
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Beautifully done Sonnet

Enjoyed it much

Elizabeth Dandy

Re: Sonnet #3 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:30:14 AM AEST
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Great comeback, Matthew... I love it!!
I have missed your beautiful poems... Glad to see you here again...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Sonnet #3 (User Rating: 1 )
by SinginSilence on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:24:49 AM AEST
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A Sonnet! Oh, I do love a good sonnet so thank you . I love writing sonnets, I must confess iambic pentameter can create quite a challenge for me from time to time, i sometimes just forget about it, but i think you did a good job with it. I only ask you for some end punctuation, maybe a comma or period so it reads better.

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