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Array ( [sid] => 100814 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding Black [time] => 2005-07-10 22:37:50 [hometext] => Smothered. [bodytext] => Veins are so invaded
With evils so pervaded

The moon awakens and so does my internal darkness
That saturates
And condemns my once
Pure and righteous soul.

Shadows speak and call my wretched name
With a voice so
Sweet and seductive
So passionate and fulfilling

Evil soul I am, treacherous sinful being
Of which contains
No wholesome light
Darkening everything I touch
I must die tonight

Lying spirit is dying, must bring it to its end
Taking hold of the dagger
I wrench my heart with full force
In order to dry it of all illness
Weaken its only source

For my spirit
Is
So soaked in darkness
That when my flesh is torn
I bleed black.

My veins are so invaded
With evils so pervaded

I’m bleeding black…
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Bleeding Black

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:37:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Veins are so invaded
With evils so pervaded

The moon awakens and so does my internal darkness
That saturates
And condemns my once
Pure and righteous soul.

Shadows speak and call my wretched name
With a voice so
Sweet and seductive
So passionate and fulfilling

Evil soul I am, treacherous sinful being
Of which contains
No wholesome light
Darkening everything I touch
I must die tonight

Lying spirit is dying, must bring it to its end
Taking hold of the dagger
I wrench my heart with full force
In order to dry it of all illness
Weaken its only source

For my spirit
Is
So soaked in darkness
That when my flesh is torn
I bleed black.

My veins are so invaded
With evils so pervaded

I’m bleeding black…

Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-07-10 22:37:50]
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Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:46:36 PM AEST
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I love your choice of words in this poem. 'pervaded, condemn, saturate' it's refreshing to read a poem with good vocabulary. The idea of being so evil that you bleed black is amazing. It expresses the idea of a doomed death. Excellent write.

Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:48:13 PM AEST
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Beautiful darkness Rach..

I love the repetitive 1st and last stanzas..
it felt.. "full circle"

B

Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Sunday, 10th July 2005 @ 10:59:31 PM AEST
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that truly is awesome!!

to describe darkness a beautifully as you do is sheer genius.

i love it.

wizard

Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 12:06:30 AM AEST
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A very compelling peice of poetry, written not only 2 reach out but 2 touch another being
and possibly pull them 2 your evil realm, balck is the color of this work of dark art, a most sumpious journey in to the macarbre . . .

Ben

Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 01:14:46 AM AEST
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wow truely amazing how dark this is.
awsome job.

Re: Bleeding Black (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:09:54 PM AEST
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i too love your use of words
it was an utterly fantastic poem
well done
-->Rae

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