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Array ( [sid] => 100844 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Live On [time] => 2005-07-11 06:53:46 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Offers a pillow
To suffocate yourself
So you no longer need to long
For all that matters
For that matters

The afterglow of whats below
In the old tree of self pity
So move along now ther's
nothing to see
In the deep recesses of your memories
In there you dont belong anymore
You got so low now but you're gonna
Swallow it all down like a good child
And live on
Live on

So listen to the song
And whisper the lyrics
Hum the melody
Keeping yourslef together
Keeping yourself strong
Telling yourself that you're wrong
It was their fault all along
You just didnt belong

Those blisters from walking
Trying to escape those days
You can heal now
You can stop now
You can stop turning those corners
You can stop plunging daggers
Into your heart and wrists [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 13 [informant] => harlot20 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Live On

Contributed by harlot20 on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:53:46 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Offers a pillow
To suffocate yourself
So you no longer need to long
For all that matters
For that matters

The afterglow of whats below
In the old tree of self pity
So move along now ther's
nothing to see
In the deep recesses of your memories
In there you dont belong anymore
You got so low now but you're gonna
Swallow it all down like a good child
And live on
Live on

So listen to the song
And whisper the lyrics
Hum the melody
Keeping yourslef together
Keeping yourself strong
Telling yourself that you're wrong
It was their fault all along
You just didnt belong

Those blisters from walking
Trying to escape those days
You can heal now
You can stop now
You can stop turning those corners
You can stop plunging daggers
Into your heart and wrists

Copyright © harlot20 ... [ 2005-07-11 06:53:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Live On (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:49:14 PM AEST
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in the first line there needs to be a subject. the second stanza needs nothing capitalized and there's in place of ther's. i loved the poem because of the tone, just how you wrote it, and the topic. keep writing.

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