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Array ( [sid] => 100884 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Let Me Go! [time] => 2005-07-11 16:57:13 [hometext] => I'm still struggling with my past... my innocence lost against my will... (not my best work) [bodytext] => Let me go
Pry your fingers off me
Let my skin breathe again
Give me back my purity

Let me go
Give me back my clothes
Let my body be mine again
I'll make sure no one knows

Let me go
And no one will hear of this
Let me live my life again
Give me back my innocence

Let me go
I want to escape
Let me be free once again
From the nightmares that followed my rape [comments] => 5 [counter] => 253 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Let Me Go!

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 04:57:13 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Let me go
Pry your fingers off me
Let my skin breathe again
Give me back my purity

Let me go
Give me back my clothes
Let my body be mine again
I'll make sure no one knows

Let me go
And no one will hear of this
Let me live my life again
Give me back my innocence

Let me go
I want to escape
Let me be free once again
From the nightmares that followed my rape

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-07-11 16:57:13]
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Re: Let Me Go! (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 05:52:26 PM AEST
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I wrote a poem about rape, but I never experienced it. I think this poem is absolutely stunning. It's touching, also. Great write. If you need someone to talk to, just IM me, or email me.

Re: Let Me Go! (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 06:44:13 PM AEST
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Well done, I can feel the desperation within these few lines.

Re: Let Me Go! (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 10:14:08 PM AEST
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certainly isnt your best, but it still speaks to me, and that gives it quality. im not one that really cares for repetition, so thats all that irked me. you may have lost your innocence, but that shouldnt be the cause of you losing anything more, of course growth is hard, moving on is hard, forgiving is extremely hard, but all must be done, or this demon will never go away. this of course was a good poem, better than most that i read today, and its good to read poems that meet my standards. i hope that you keep struggling to finally have the future you want, and that you let the past go. ::notices that this is the most compassionate comment ever made:: =]

Re: Let Me Go! (User Rating: 1 )
by colinbaker62 on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:18:59 PM AEST
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Hi kie-kie , I can relate to this through my wife's childhood experiences. I am not personally a lover of dark poetry, but this really caught my eye.Thanks

Colin

Re: Let Me Go! (User Rating: 1 )
by fireispassion on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:45:23 PM AEST
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wow thats an intense poem i really like it. it's moving in many ways. great job!!!

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