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Array ( [sid] => 100896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Rebirth [time] => 2005-07-11 20:15:02 [hometext] => A thought of that special someone can kill you... and breathe life back into your lungs all in one lapse in time... [bodytext] => The moon woke me with a tender kiss,
Pallid loneliness radiating from her solemn smile,
Neon static numbers mouthing,


3:00 A.M.!! (A familiar song…)

With their hoarse voices of silent restlessness…
My child fingers itched with anticipation,
Yearning to weave expressions of moonlit inspiration,
Longing to paint a picture of you
With your technicolor eyes of bittersweet mystery,
Slowly undressing me… naked and vulnerable…
Every shrouded flaw, every hidden desire…

EXPOSED…

I remember…

Your breath of cherries and lust, intoxicating,
Words spoken in silence caressing the edges of my sanity…
I wonder each passing moment…
What lies behind those clouded orbs of eternity?


Divine intervention found in a touch,
Flames of passion and adoration lick the curves of my heart,
Burning down the walls surrounding my soul, my sacred palace,
Where every thought and emotion sleeps tranquilly…


Today, I was reborn,

Rubbing the residues of crusty slumber from my dreaming eyes,
Yawning at the dreariness of Yesterday…

Just by thinking of you… [comments] => 2 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 2 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Rebirth

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Monday, 11th July 2005 @ 08:15:02 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The moon woke me with a tender kiss,
Pallid loneliness radiating from her solemn smile,
Neon static numbers mouthing,


3:00 A.M.!! (A familiar song…)

With their hoarse voices of silent restlessness…
My child fingers itched with anticipation,
Yearning to weave expressions of moonlit inspiration,
Longing to paint a picture of you
With your technicolor eyes of bittersweet mystery,
Slowly undressing me… naked and vulnerable…
Every shrouded flaw, every hidden desire…

EXPOSED…

I remember…

Your breath of cherries and lust, intoxicating,
Words spoken in silence caressing the edges of my sanity…
I wonder each passing moment…
What lies behind those clouded orbs of eternity?


Divine intervention found in a touch,
Flames of passion and adoration lick the curves of my heart,
Burning down the walls surrounding my soul, my sacred palace,
Where every thought and emotion sleeps tranquilly…


Today, I was reborn,

Rubbing the residues of crusty slumber from my dreaming eyes,
Yawning at the dreariness of Yesterday…

Just by thinking of you…




Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-07-11 20:15:02]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Rebirth (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 02:15:49 AM AEST
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Amazing poem my dear. I love the first line
and how you personify the moon that was
just wonderful. I just all around loved how this
was written. I'd say more but I'm really tired. I
hope the hurricane isn't affecting you.

Miss talking to you,
Joel


Re: Rebirth (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 06:08:40 AM AEST
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Bretakingly beautifull.
huggs,
emy




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