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Staring back at me
Empty and so void
The eyes there that you see

Trying to escape
The voices in my head
Want to get away
Wrists are turning red

Feel the pressures leaving
Draining to the floor
Voices are subsiding
Soon they'll be no more

Room is getting darker
My eyes no longer see
The girl inside the mirror
Who was staring back at me

That girl she had a future
If she'd looked a little deeper
Banished out the voices
Serving only the Grim Reaper

She lies there now in silence
A lifeless bloody mess
Her death comes with a message
But she's voiceless to express

The only voice that's left now
Is the one here on this page
Begging all to "Please not cut,
the price is just too grave!"
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 39 [informant] => CarolinaBlue [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

The Voice Inside

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:31:27 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Reflections of a life
Staring back at me
Empty and so void
The eyes there that you see

Trying to escape
The voices in my head
Want to get away
Wrists are turning red

Feel the pressures leaving
Draining to the floor
Voices are subsiding
Soon they'll be no more

Room is getting darker
My eyes no longer see
The girl inside the mirror
Who was staring back at me

That girl she had a future
If she'd looked a little deeper
Banished out the voices
Serving only the Grim Reaper

She lies there now in silence
A lifeless bloody mess
Her death comes with a message
But she's voiceless to express

The only voice that's left now
Is the one here on this page
Begging all to "Please not cut,
the price is just too grave!"

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2005-07-12 00:31:27]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Voice Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:45:40 AM AEST
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Awh, what kinda news? I would like to get to know you more. PM me please if you feel the same. Great write, I loved it all. Now I'll think twice before I put another blade to my arm. Thanks. :)

Re: The Voice Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 12:57:11 AM AEST
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Very sad but much needed write.
Usually it's someone glorifying it .
Sorry for your bad news but keep writing as this write just might save a life.
God bless u.
huggs, strength,
emy

Re: The Voice Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:11:22 AM AEST
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SCREAM it from the rooftops if you must..
(thoughts and prayers my friend)

a true tragedy..
I'm so sorry Blue..

B

Re: The Voice Inside (User Rating: 1 )
by bernard on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:05:28 AM AEST
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You did right to get it out of your system sometimes a new star can work wonders. I will remember you in my prayers tonight. keep smiling now from bernard.

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