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Array ( [sid] => 10105 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Sentinel Falls Silent [time] => 2003-01-10 03:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Piercing silver crescent
Leaving none it it's wake
Kindly sweeping the filth away
The Gods of millions laid to waste
Bloody blasphemephy, a joyfull sight

Forever is never in the Valkyrie's eyes
Toying with the fates' visions
The Alchemist's purity unraveled
Under Heaven's cloud
We clot and fester in our wounds
Decayed whores, rotting
A fragment of our highest achievements

The seal shattered
Waiting is our duty
Fall silent with the winds below
Solem and loathsome creatures remain
In the time of judgement
Monuments to humanity's brilliance.
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The Sentinel Falls Silent

Contributed by 9opeth6 on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 03:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Piercing silver crescent
Leaving none it it's wake
Kindly sweeping the filth away
The Gods of millions laid to waste
Bloody blasphemephy, a joyfull sight

Forever is never in the Valkyrie's eyes
Toying with the fates' visions
The Alchemist's purity unraveled
Under Heaven's cloud
We clot and fester in our wounds
Decayed whores, rotting
A fragment of our highest achievements

The seal shattered
Waiting is our duty
Fall silent with the winds below
Solem and loathsome creatures remain
In the time of judgement
Monuments to humanity's brilliance.

Copyright © 9opeth6 ... [ 2003-01-10 03:20:00]
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Re: The Sentinel Falls Silent (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Thursday, 17th June 2004 @ 05:52:37 AM AEST
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Somewhat difficult to explain this herein your write but it is nevertheles an inundating rhythm of intricacies that cannot fail to mire the senses of the reader in a surreal afterthought...a vision of humanity's fallen shame once and the next a glimpse of the judgement at the end of all things. A bit dark but I sort of like proceedings of this poem in ints strange twists. I being a man of sombre attenuations myself. Nicely done in my opinion...a very dark but somehow very meaningful write...judgement day indeed!. There is no rhyme but it has a pleasing staccato feel to its composition...again I like it in that announciation. By the way...you might want to check the spelling for blasphemy in thr last line of your first stanza.

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