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Array ( [sid] => 101063 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Surrender [time] => 2005-07-13 04:26:45 [hometext] => Sometimes a different voice comes calling [bodytext] => ~~~~

You’ve always been there
When my world was crashing down
When my spirit hit rock bottom
I was crawling on the ground

You’d send an angel
Who would help me to my feet
And guide me through the darkness
Until again I thought I’d lead

And I’ve made some poor decisions
And sometimes I lost sight of you
But you never gave up on me
Despite the pain I put you through

~~~~

Feels like forever
Since I’ve turned to you this way
And now I’m not even certain
That I know quite what to say

I’ve gone through changes
Some perhaps a little late
At times I fought them all the way
But patiently you’d wait

And you would stand upon the sidelines
And you would let me play my games
While the stakes weren’t always certain
You would not release your claim

~~~~

There were some rough times
When I couldn’t face myself
When I thought I’d given all I had
Certain there was nothing else

But you were with me
And through you I remained strong
Now I finally remember
What I should have known, all along

I had come here seeking answers
I got down upon my knees
It took some time to realize
But now suddenly I see

~~~~

I just need to surrender
All I am unselfishly
And by loving you

I can love

Me

~~~~
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Surrender

Contributed by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:26:45 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



~~~~

You’ve always been there
When my world was crashing down
When my spirit hit rock bottom
I was crawling on the ground

You’d send an angel
Who would help me to my feet
And guide me through the darkness
Until again I thought I’d lead

And I’ve made some poor decisions
And sometimes I lost sight of you
But you never gave up on me
Despite the pain I put you through

~~~~

Feels like forever
Since I’ve turned to you this way
And now I’m not even certain
That I know quite what to say

I’ve gone through changes
Some perhaps a little late
At times I fought them all the way
But patiently you’d wait

And you would stand upon the sidelines
And you would let me play my games
While the stakes weren’t always certain
You would not release your claim

~~~~

There were some rough times
When I couldn’t face myself
When I thought I’d given all I had
Certain there was nothing else

But you were with me
And through you I remained strong
Now I finally remember
What I should have known, all along

I had come here seeking answers
I got down upon my knees
It took some time to realize
But now suddenly I see

~~~~

I just need to surrender
All I am unselfishly
And by loving you

I can love

Me

~~~~




Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-07-13 04:26:45]
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Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:38:38 AM AEST
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Very beautifull masterpeice.
huggs,
emy
Awesome.


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 08:30:44 AM AEST
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Beautiful and inspiring write , well done!!!

Leia36


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:14:11 AM AEST
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Now thats just touching Nazz.

There were some rough times
When I couldn’t face myself
When I thought I’d given all I had
Certain there was nothing else


I just love that line, i could read this over and over again.

Jane xxx


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:47:50 AM AEST
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I don't think I've ever seen anyone put my own thoughts into words so well. I can fully relate my friend. Welcome, home.
Stitch


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 11:59:06 AM AEST
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Damn I love this site. I think if it wasn't here I would likely to have never had the wonderful pleasure of reading this. There are so many poems here that are just brilliant, this one joins the ranks. Thank you for sharing this exquisite piece. When I first read the poem, I was thinking of being saved by a fellow human, learning to love again. When I read it again. I took it differently like you were speaking of God or a god. I am not a christian so..... whatever the meaning to you. It was written very elegantly. Peace to you. Laura


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 12:10:05 PM AEST
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She sounds like a keeper Nazzy : )
This is a wonderful song, it flows very smoothly, your expression is fantastic! The emotions shine through in this lovely piece, and I'm so glad to see a new post from you!

Scorp.


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 01:05:23 PM AEST
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Ah, the divine poet returns to steal our breath, deprive us of our expression, and leave us empty, yearning for more... Welcome back, cheri. Glad to see your words again, my friend, I've missed them! Another radiant example of the perfect talent you possess. To love another, we need to love ourselves first... beautiful metaphor, douce Scott. And quite true, at that! Dripping with emotion and passion, a love that is just starting to awaken. I wish you the happiest of days with your special someone, cheri! Words cannot describe the joy that I feel, the emotional and spiritual uplift that I recieved from this masterpiece! I absolutely LOVE this, and will visit it often! Surrender, cheri... surrender to love and bliss. It is the most exquisite feeling, worthy of a poet's pen. Gorgeous. Thank you so much for sharing this with us, Nazzy. Missing you my friend! Welcome Home! *Huggles!*. All my love. Forever,

Your dear friend/avid fan,

~*Stephy*~


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Wednesday, 13th July 2005 @ 04:04:32 PM AEST
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He will never forsake you, ever.


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 02:07:08 AM AEST
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wow Nazzy that is a masterpiece dude.,
I am impress...
Miss your writes.
Dont be a stranger now.lol

hugs


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 15th July 2005 @ 04:34:52 PM AEST
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Oh Dear Naz.................this just took my heart a' soaring. You never cease to amaze me with your outlook.........it takes like "forever" to learn what you just penned, but when finally learned............it will take you both to the very end!!!!
Beautifully written, and the expressions used were outstanding indeed! When you can love another inspite of yourself, then You have accomplished what others may never know!!!
Go for it Naz............that's what's called true love.
Warm love to you and your very lucky lady......
consue


Re: Surrender (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 07:13:09 PM AEST
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Hi Naz,

My heart was deeply touched by this poem, as you spoke from the soul. I'm humbled that you would share a piece of your faith journey. I do believe that He is always there, even when we are not aware of His presence.

Thank you for sharing this, Nazzy. "He never promised us a smooth journey, just a smooth landing."

Great write, my friend

Will

PS Naz, is Nazmythiansgirl any relation to you?




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