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Array ( [sid] => 10118 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Goodbye my friend [time] => 2003-01-10 07:40:00 [hometext] => i wrote this a while ago when i was still with an abusive b/f. i was depressed and suicidal and even tried to slit my wrists... im over it now though but i thought i might submit this poem anyway... [bodytext] => goodbye my friend
thankyou for being there
goodbye my friend
thankyou for your listening ear
goodbye my friend
i aint no f****** star
goodbye my friend
now that you are far
goodbye my friend
you said youd never leave
goodbye my friend
why f****** lie to me?
goodbye my friend
you dont know how i feel
goodbye my friend
see you around, its been real
goodbye my friend
ill join you in rebirth
goodbye my friend
as now i leave this earth
goodbye my friend
i hate the people every one
goodbye my friend
this was no f****** fun
goodbye my friend
i wanted you to know
goodbye my friend
now i must go
goodbye my friend
i have no more to give
your a real f****** ***hole my friend
you dont deserve to live. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 213 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Eloise [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Goodbye my friend

Contributed by Eloise on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 07:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

goodbye my friend
thankyou for being there
goodbye my friend
thankyou for your listening ear
goodbye my friend
i aint no f****** star
goodbye my friend
now that you are far
goodbye my friend
you said youd never leave
goodbye my friend
why f****** lie to me?
goodbye my friend
you dont know how i feel
goodbye my friend
see you around, its been real
goodbye my friend
ill join you in rebirth
goodbye my friend
as now i leave this earth
goodbye my friend
i hate the people every one
goodbye my friend
this was no f****** fun
goodbye my friend
i wanted you to know
goodbye my friend
now i must go
goodbye my friend
i have no more to give
your a real f****** ***hole my friend
you dont deserve to live.

Copyright © Eloise ... [ 2003-01-10 07:40:00]
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Re: Goodbye my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 09:34:27 AM AEST
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I really FEEL this. I have been there. Read my poem entitled "Last Laugh". If u survive wack dudes u win!!!

Re: Goodbye my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 09:38:37 AM AEST
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Here is the page:
http://www.your-poetry.com/oldsite/show-author.php?AID=747

You will like this poem "The last laugh"

Re: Goodbye my friend (User Rating: 1 )
by Eloise on Friday, 10th January 2003 @ 03:11:17 PM AEST
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that poem the last laugh was really good... thankyou for telling me to read it...

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