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Array ( [sid] => 101201 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => .confusion. [time] => 2005-07-14 18:15:37 [hometext] => Was a journal entry... ended up being a crappy poem. COMMENT PLEASE. [bodytext] => .i am everything.
.i never wanted to be.
.i wish i could explain.
.how much it hurts.
.to live.
.for no reason.
.and to have no reason.
.but i can't.
.i can't express that yet.
.again, don't ask why.
.again, i don't know.
.i wish i knew something.
.anything.
.i wish i could explain everything.
.or anything.
.i wish i understood my own life.
.my own world.
.the world that brings me to tears.
.each and every night.
.but i am human.
.it is terrible.
.terrifying.
.and utterly astonishing.
.how amazing life can seem.
.under one light.
.and how evil.
.it comes off.
.under another.
.if only, if only.
.it were.
.simple.
.just plain simple. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 13 [informant] => CBlake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

.confusion.

Contributed by CBlake on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:15:37 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

.i am everything.
.i never wanted to be.
.i wish i could explain.
.how much it hurts.
.to live.
.for no reason.
.and to have no reason.
.but i can't.
.i can't express that yet.
.again, don't ask why.
.again, i don't know.
.i wish i knew something.
.anything.
.i wish i could explain everything.
.or anything.
.i wish i understood my own life.
.my own world.
.the world that brings me to tears.
.each and every night.
.but i am human.
.it is terrible.
.terrifying.
.and utterly astonishing.
.how amazing life can seem.
.under one light.
.and how evil.
.it comes off.
.under another.
.if only, if only.
.it were.
.simple.
.just plain simple.

Copyright © CBlake ... [ 2005-07-14 18:15:37]
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Re: .confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by Urizen on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 06:56:49 PM AEST
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I don't think this poem is 'Crappy' it raises some interesting questions and ones that I think about too often. I really liked it, keep writing and please keep sharing.

Re: .confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by Rae on Thursday, 14th July 2005 @ 07:52:43 PM AEST
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not crappy at all.
u have said what everyone have always felt.
and that is not crappy.
very good write my friend.

Re: .confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by LORI on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:29:15 PM AEST
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Well i know you wrote what anyone would want to say but to scared to do. I know my life is not easy and you just did a good job of explaining it! thank you

Re: .confusion. (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 05:42:46 PM AEST
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Amazing.. i can relate to this alot..
This so called life can be a chore
but, we have to keep our spirits up
Learning to accept things we cannot change, and change things we can..
To understanding the wrong we have to find whats wrong..Look within your soul..
~~~Michelle~~~

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