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[aid] => mick
[title] => JUS NEEDS SEX
[time] => 2005-07-16 04:28:13
[hometext] => Nuthin personal, o.k. guys???????????
[bodytext] =>
If it looks good, you'll see it
If it sounds good, you'll hear it
If it's marketed right
you'll buy it
But...If it's REAL
You'll FEEL it...
~KR~
SultryRose's Signatures
Jus playin around
like a kid with toy.
He'll never stick around.
He's still a curious boy.
He don't want luv
He jus needs sex.
He ain't no man, it seems
in our world, high tech.
Put that thing back
don't interest me none.
Luv don't run-n-hide
after you're selfish, hon.
Anyone can play games
in adult, always pretending.
After a cheap thrill
Your story's tottaly ended.
Luv endures thru pain
forgets it's own need.
He'll always be un true.
Jus makes caring hearts bleed.
[comments] => 13
[counter] => 278
[topic] => 34
[informant] => emystar
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => SongLyrics
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 07:06:09 AM AEST
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Awesome!
I totally agree with your thoughts.
This poem kicked a** and can mean alot to many young women everywhere!
You go girl..lol
Best of hope tidings to you. |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 16th July 2005 @ 11:09:13 AM AEST
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lol cute poem emy glad i'm not like that lol
gotta love your poetry . . .
Ben |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by bernard on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 05:18:59 AM AEST
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| Emy I like the way you write. It is down to earth and has much wisdom many of the younger ones would be well advised to read more of your work.Thank you for your kind comments on my Fairy-Tales. I will keep on writing them as long as I get an idea on what to write. Thanks again from Martha and bernard. |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by lovingcritters on
Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 04:42:41 PM AEST
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There is a lot of truth in this write Little Emy, I know some men are interested in just sex, I really liked your explanation of what real love is. Love really does endure pain, and forgets it's own need!
Great way of putting it dear
Warm love
consuemom |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 12:05:41 AM AEST
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No offense taken. A good expression of what does and what doesn't constitute a meaningful love relationship. Yes, the unselfishness is a trademark of a more mature loving relationship. I enjoyed the style and wording of this poem.
Well done, emy
Will |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:32:35 AM AEST
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emy
i love your poems, this one was another great write,
hugs
tasha |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Overstated on
Tuesday, 2nd August 2005 @ 07:30:57 PM AEST
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lol the mnusic scared me! i was happy listening to the smashing pumpkins! that aside - this was a cool poem verey honest as always - you are one of my favourite writers on these boards so keep writing!!
rod |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Archie on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 11:37:16 PM AEST
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| I totally agree. I hope he gets a life and learns to really care about some one. Your potrayal of this was very cool. |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by jmpy84 on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 01:36:18 AM AEST
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| for some ppl this my be true but it was expressed well |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th August 2005 @ 03:28:39 AM AEST
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| good write from a good writer..sex is only part of it,,and in my case a small part of it lol |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 11:45:19 PM AEST
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Well done, grrlfriend..... you tell 'em like it is..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 04:52:20 PM AEST
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Very nice write here Emy
I think a lot of people have all been used once or twice, male and female..
Thank God, I havn't been.. not my body at least.. My heart has ran around the block a few times lol.
The responsibility lies in ones own self.. to know when and when not to give your whole self to another.
I truly believe a wonderful upbringing.. a good parent talk to the young children is wise.. to let them know, your body is sacred.. to engage in such a wonderful experience of love for one another at the right time, with the right person.. and pray to God that once you give your whole soul to that person, that he or she stays forever with you.
I once spoke with a man who just wanted to date.. only wanted to have sex.. did not want to make any kind of committment.. he was an example of being a user.. a very insecure and self-serving individual. I pray he does not use himself up... I pray those people he comes into contact with is wise to his loveless charms..
Find the poem written about (Christopher Reeves, by Randy Johnson) and my comment there will show you the three types of people..I spoke about, and often do...
There is so much we can learn from out of this write.. more of these types of writes should be written..
I gave my body to two men in my entire life. My first husband, bless him, he is in heaven, he gave me two beautiful sons.. My second husband helped me raise my sons, his sons.. for my first husband.
I have went outside of my second marriage for love, but I am thankful, I never gave my body up to that extra person.. I learned a hard cold lesson there, even if I only shared my heart.
When we share our bodies with a true love.. I believe we share it also with God..
I even believe.. sad but true.. even raped victims, even though its a tragedy.. God is there between that engagement as well. Just my feelings..
So, with that being said.. again, thank you for taking the time to share a most important part of our lives..
The word sex to me is raw..
The warm feeling of making love sounds more like togetherness forever and ever...
RLPoetess ; )) |
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Re: JUS NEEDS SEX
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by Sinned on
Monday, 28th November 2005 @ 10:09:45 AM AEST
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A man is a breeder and cannot help himself;he sees an atractive girl-woman and his head automaticly turns.
Even after a marriage inwhich he really loves the woman his being male just draws him to look.
Most men control their eurges and stay true,not meaning that they won't look and or fantasize.
Just be thankful for a man who loves you and controls his urges.
Very good read Emmy.
Dennis |
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