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Array ( [sid] => 101501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the surrounding darkness [time] => 2005-07-18 09:25:11 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the darkness of this world surrounds me
catching me in an ever lasting storm
forcing me to live my life in shadow
making me inside feel torn
i cant escape
in hell there's no light
its all my fault
i should have tried harder to do right

the darkness of this world surrounds me
filling each corner of my soul
stripping away all feelings
so that i am no longer whole
am i still alive
even though i feel nothing?
or am i no longer
someone, somebody, something

the darkness of this world surrounds me
leaving no room for bliss
i've so many sins
i difinitly deserve this
o when will light
fill my heart at last?
when will all the saddness
be a thing of the past?

[comments] => 3 [counter] => 171 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xXxmegsxXx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
the surrounding darkness

Contributed by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:25:11 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



the darkness of this world surrounds me
catching me in an ever lasting storm
forcing me to live my life in shadow
making me inside feel torn
i cant escape
in hell there's no light
its all my fault
i should have tried harder to do right

the darkness of this world surrounds me
filling each corner of my soul
stripping away all feelings
so that i am no longer whole
am i still alive
even though i feel nothing?
or am i no longer
someone, somebody, something

the darkness of this world surrounds me
leaving no room for bliss
i've so many sins
i difinitly deserve this
o when will light
fill my heart at last?
when will all the saddness
be a thing of the past?





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Re: the surrounding darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by JenJen on Monday, 18th July 2005 @ 09:29:30 AM AEST
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:'(:'( very sad:'(:'(
but very touching!! i will remember that poem for the rest of ma life (nxt 10mins) lol
beautiful!!
Luv
JenJen
xxx


Re: the surrounding darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by jemer on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:18:21 AM AEST
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wot jenny sed


Re: the surrounding darkness (User Rating: 1 )
by xXxmegsxXx on Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:21:39 AM AEST
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gemz, ur memory's not THAT good!! lol
jk
luv ya relli




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