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Array ( [sid] => 101576 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Believe in a Dream [time] => 2005-07-19 00:27:25 [hometext] => believe in yourself and your talent, the rest is history....and for those who doubted you, just make them wait. [bodytext] => In the ever hopeful core of my dreams,
In the pupil of everything I am…
Do you see desire
So strong it sets the midnight sky on fire,
Causing each star to shiver,
And Each angel in heaven to shine?
Do you see passion rising in waves of determination
Elevated so high you get strung off its sight,
Dizzy of its breath,
Drunk off its mere touch as it brushes past your skin?
Do you see possibility in my eyes as they hand
You back your reflection magically?
No?
Then let these questions and thoughts
forever mark
Their place in your memory,
Holding in just slightly
you need to be reminded again,
And when I reach the top,
I’ll do you the honors.
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Believe in a Dream

Contributed by xxbreathlessx on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 12:27:25 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

In the ever hopeful core of my dreams,
In the pupil of everything I am…
Do you see desire
So strong it sets the midnight sky on fire,
Causing each star to shiver,
And Each angel in heaven to shine?
Do you see passion rising in waves of determination
Elevated so high you get strung off its sight,
Dizzy of its breath,
Drunk off its mere touch as it brushes past your skin?
Do you see possibility in my eyes as they hand
You back your reflection magically?
No?
Then let these questions and thoughts
forever mark
Their place in your memory,
Holding in just slightly
you need to be reminded again,
And when I reach the top,
I’ll do you the honors.

Copyright Â© xxbreathlessx ... [ 2005-07-19 00:27:25]
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Re: Believe in a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by billy_corgan on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 01:15:59 AM AEST
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Nicely written! Interesting formation of stanzas. Reminded me slightly (its theme) of Rudyard Kipling's poem "If". Consider reading that for further insipiration.

-billy corgan (SP)

Re: Believe in a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by HOPE4ME2 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:43:06 AM AEST
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"Do you see possibility in my eyes as they hand you back your reflection?" This line had me all the way, loved the flow of your words and the emotion within them. You will have no problems reaching the top.

Blessings
Linda

Re: Believe in a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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Great job with this! Your expression is awesome, and your drive and determination are very evident in your words...Love the sting at the end : )

Scorp.

Re: Believe in a Dream (User Rating: 1 )
by epsftbllchic1617 on Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:18:21 PM AEST
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I love all the images my mind creates when I read your work

-Laura

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