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do you see that im only 16

dont you get it

i dont know what im supossed to say

you get down on one knee

my heart is pounding

r u going to stop

you look into my eyes

and say what you feel

i look in your hand

and i see the ring

i look eye to eye with you

"dont you see what your doing"

r u crazy

im only 16

im not ready for this

lets just go on like we never knew eachother

because i know im not ready to be a mother

i like you very much

but do you see what u r saying

i dont think you do

so no the answer is no

i dont feel bad

because i know what i did was right

but i also know

that things will never be the same

between u and me

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you think im the one

Contributed by hopefades on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 02:54:59 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

do you count our birthdays

do you see that im only 16

dont you get it

i dont know what im supossed to say

you get down on one knee

my heart is pounding

r u going to stop

you look into my eyes

and say what you feel

i look in your hand

and i see the ring

i look eye to eye with you

"dont you see what your doing"

r u crazy

im only 16

im not ready for this

lets just go on like we never knew eachother

because i know im not ready to be a mother

i like you very much

but do you see what u r saying

i dont think you do

so no the answer is no

i dont feel bad

because i know what i did was right

but i also know

that things will never be the same

between u and me

Copyright © hopefades ... [ 2005-07-19 02:54:59]
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Re: you think im the one (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 03:27:25 AM AEST
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you are right 16 is still young. Tell you this enjoy your life more. do thing have fun.. the year go fast in time there will be some one specical ..say no and joy life...

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