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Fueling flame with words
Drowning pools of blood
Shaking innocence inside out
Mental awareness starving energy
Breaking the day away from dawn
Shattering glass to control time
Mindless game, toying ways

Awaken the day
Falling without hope
Tell me what’s inside
What’s in it for me?

Cruel laughing in my mind
Giving new meaning to hope
Falling circles cloud my vision
Can you tell what’s wrong?
Bleeding for new found hope
Hanging on for all tears
Don’t look back when I fall
Just mourn that I was here
To hate you all inside

Awaken the day
Falling without hope
Tell me what’s inside
What’s in it for me? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Bones [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Box

Contributed by Bones on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 05:55:27 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Forsaking smile for tears
Fueling flame with words
Drowning pools of blood
Shaking innocence inside out
Mental awareness starving energy
Breaking the day away from dawn
Shattering glass to control time
Mindless game, toying ways

Awaken the day
Falling without hope
Tell me what’s inside
What’s in it for me?

Cruel laughing in my mind
Giving new meaning to hope
Falling circles cloud my vision
Can you tell what’s wrong?
Bleeding for new found hope
Hanging on for all tears
Don’t look back when I fall
Just mourn that I was here
To hate you all inside

Awaken the day
Falling without hope
Tell me what’s inside
What’s in it for me?

Copyright © Bones ... [ 2005-07-19 17:55:27]
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Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by justme03 on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 06:06:07 PM AEST
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this is an awesome poem. i just read it three times in a row lol and im gonna go read it again!
i love the words u use and it is really getting my brain thinking
awesome :D
luv, ~Kortnie~

Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 07:55:11 PM AEST
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Shattering glass to control time....hmm well, I dont know if i would do that, but I can think of a few ways. Deep, write. thanks for posting
Brew~

Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:46:19 AM AEST
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awesome write. i enjoyed reading this one. it was very deep and hit the spot. it was a great poem adn you used the perfect words. very nice work! and you hate us all inside? oh, that's real nice. lol. jk. great work, keep it up!!

~sprints

Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 9th August 2005 @ 05:19:02 PM AEST
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Great minds think alike. I have a poem I have yet to release called the box. In my poem people admire the outside of the box but never look inside. This however is truly deep. I have missed reading your poetry. I remember when I got that one idea from you for a song. You have great talent. Good writing.

Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 09:44:18 AM AEST
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To answer your question honestly, pain, love,happines, suffering, betrayal, and death not exactly in that order.

Re: The Box (User Rating: 1 )
by cocobeware on Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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very deep you were thinking outside the box

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