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[title] => Wordless
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Words are lost in rhymes
Designed to be poetic,
Yet you lose a line's
Rawness in retrospect.
Is the price of poetry
Lost in format,
Or is it lost in complimentary
Reciprocation of tact?
Using these verses
To express myself
Are becoming curses
With each emotion felt.
Nothing I write has been perfect,
And I only wish that I could say
That all the imperfections
Mirror the price I pay
To portray myself truly
Without any hint of beauty.
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Wordless
Contributed by
Essentially9
on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 09:29:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Wordless
Words are lost in rhymes
Designed to be poetic,
Yet you lose a line's
Rawness in retrospect.
Is the price of poetry
Lost in format,
Or is it lost in complimentary
Reciprocation of tact?
Using these verses
To express myself
Are becoming curses
With each emotion felt.
Nothing I write has been perfect,
And I only wish that I could say
That all the imperfections
Mirror the price I pay
To portray myself truly
Without any hint of beauty.
Copyright ©
Essentially9
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2005-07-19 21:29:06]
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Re: Wordless
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by hauntedscorp on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:49:35 PM AEST
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Ahhh you raise an important question indeed...One we should all probably reflect on a bit. As far as this poem goes, I think you expressed what you meant to quite well...I can agree with a lot of what you've said in this write. I felt the second stanza had the hardest impact...Well put Jen...
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Re: Wordless
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 19th July 2005 @ 10:52:09 PM AEST
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| This is a wonderful write! I agree 100% |
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Re: Wordless
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by Doriens_Picture on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 12:22:45 AM AEST
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I know I have not been around in a while
but you still have a friend in me who thinks
that you are beautiful beyond words and
who loves your poems
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Re: Wordless
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 09:02:24 AM AEST
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Very nice, and 2 a point true, well crafted as
always . . .
Ben |
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Re: Wordless
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by hardrocker15198916 on
Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:08:23 AM AEST
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thats awesome
i have felt similar to that. |
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Re: Wordless
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by Fionndruinne on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 09:48:56 PM AEST
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This impressed me. It did. I've always liked strength of feeling just like this - not angst as it's usually found, but a force of emotion bespeaking thought; intense introspection and will. It's flowing through this piece. Well done.
Andrew |
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Re: Wordless
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 09:54:24 AM AEST
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I don't beleive there is such a thing as a perfect poem. Perfect is in the eye of the reader. If the writer is looking for their own perfection...good luck..I really don't think that exists either, too many changes and moods in our lives to make perfect a constant.
But I will tell you one thing Jen....in my opinion you are an awsome poet, worthy of praise. Don't ever seel yourself short while raising the bar. |
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Re: Wordless
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 14th August 2005 @ 12:17:07 AM AEST
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Words written from the heart are always Perfect!!
Perfection is like beauty...it is in the eyes of the beholder...
Jenni |
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Re: Wordless
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by emystar on
Thursday, 18th August 2005 @ 11:20:08 PM AEST
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U r a beautifull person and most beautifull poetess.
Please take it easy on yourself, my friend.
keep writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Wordless
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 05:52:51 PM AEST
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A flawless piece of poetry so remarkably written. I wished I possessed half the talent in writing as u do. You write from the heart.
Don't ever stop writing u talented girl!
Hugs,
Sue, Dreamer |
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Re: Wordless
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by Archie on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 01:31:01 AM AEST
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| From what i read by you I think you are an honest writer. I will not stereo type you for i feel the same way about a lot of my poems |
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Re: Wordless
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 14th October 2005 @ 08:05:26 AM AEST
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You are one gifted lady. This was in fact a beautiful write.
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Wordless
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by majinZack on
Friday, 11th November 2005 @ 09:57:57 PM AEST
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I thought this poem was really good and it also portrays alot of people like myself so i can also relate...it also had pretty good rhymes and an even better subject i think
exelent job
~M. Zack |
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Re: Wordless
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by waos on
Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 11:31:06 PM AEST
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Well, your poetry is still the same, and I am glad you posted on my
poem so finding yours was faster. This poem definitely reminds
me of the ones we've taken in english here in university. something
that deserves to be comtemplated.
nice work!
~Kara |
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Re: Wordless
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by Spazzo on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 09:09:30 PM AEST
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This is a great poem. You're writing is beautiful and I am sure you are to.
Take care.
Scott |
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Re: Wordless
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 31st December 2005 @ 05:40:42 PM AEST
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We are our own worse critics, are we not? What you consider imperfect could be perfect to someone else and this is a damn good write.
You express your emotions very well and you did it perfectly IMHO. Hmmmm...seems there is a hint of beauty because your writing is very well presented. I've seen a lot of trash on here and certainly this is not....so there is a hint of beauty in the mere fact that you write very well.
Take care....and well....keep something coming. Obviously people enjoy your writing.
Tim
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Re: Wordless
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by wizard on
Sunday, 14th May 2006 @ 08:53:52 PM AEST
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very nicely done!
wizard |
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Re: Wordless
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by ForeverAlone on
Monday, 30th July 2007 @ 05:03:51 PM AEST
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Hey there Jen! Hows have you been, its been so long since i last got to talk to you! Was i blind the day you posted this? Poetry seems like an extention of your heart Missy, you should never let it go. Never give up, Never give in, on wards the muse says...onwards torwards the clouds... number 9 awaits darlin!
ahahaha...Sorry Jeniroo...thought i would do a cliche YPDC comment for once.
Loved it.
Clark |
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