Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	02-June 12:11:20 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 101709 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i remember your eyes [time] => 2005-07-20 10:33:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => i remember your eyes
so beautiful and pure
there was a time in my life
i thought you were my cure

i remember your smile
with the same grace as your feet
so soft in each step
but you stumbled to meet

i remember your voice
so vague but still angelic
but you are just a memory
a forgotten relic

all the things you had said to me
are gone with time
for there once was a time
i thought you were mine

but no more no more... [comments] => 3 [counter] => 211 [topic] => 24 [informant] => hardrocker15198916 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

i remember your eyes

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:33:55 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

i remember your eyes
so beautiful and pure
there was a time in my life
i thought you were my cure

i remember your smile
with the same grace as your feet
so soft in each step
but you stumbled to meet

i remember your voice
so vague but still angelic
but you are just a memory
a forgotten relic

all the things you had said to me
are gone with time
for there once was a time
i thought you were mine

but no more no more...

Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-07-20 10:33:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: i remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 10:55:20 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

wow that was a touching write. very heartfelt. i can relate to this. christopher.

Re: i remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by LolaWhite on Wednesday, 20th July 2005 @ 11:25:04 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

My favorite part was;

i remember your smile
with the same grace as your feet
so soft in each step
but you stumbled to meet

This poem flowed nicely. A beautiful write.
LW

Re: i remember your eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 08:45:02 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

this reminded me of a person that was in my life...."all the things you had said to me
are gone with time" spoke very loudly to me, but hey, the whole poem did. it brought me back in time....

yes, i'm very fascinated with curiosity. everything i write has such a deep meaning inside of it. not many see it. most just see what lies on the surface. yes, my mind is a little phsycotic at times as you've seen...i rarely write about it though. we all seem to have that side to ourselves...even if some wish to deny it...the thoughts are still there....

summer

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com