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Lets go and throw our lifes away
Mabey they will hate us?
ur screames are burnning inside of me.
Why are we soo pathatic?
I know they will forget it.
Why do we feel this way?
whare have we gone wrong?
lets go and throw our lifes away.'

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throw our life away

Contributed by Taylor on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 07:18:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

sooner or later we wont make it.
Lets go and throw our lifes away
Mabey they will hate us?
ur screames are burnning inside of me.
Why are we soo pathatic?
I know they will forget it.
Why do we feel this way?
whare have we gone wrong?
lets go and throw our lifes away.'

Copyright Â© Taylor ... [ 2005-07-21 19:18:27]
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Re: throw our life away (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 08:53:35 PM AEST
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Life is full of question my friend but we
need to find the answers not give up.
You wrote this write very well and it has
a lot of truth and feelings I think we all I
have felt. Keep your head up and keep
up the good writes….Steve

Re: throw our life away (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 22nd July 2005 @ 10:52:49 PM AEST
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well written. and i feel like this. so that means we can't let each other do it. please, be strong and don't throw your life away. that would be sad, 'cause i wouldn't see anymore good writing like the previous write!! i liked how you expressed yourself. and many of us feel like this. but we need to be strong. so, good luck, Taylor, and don't give up. but, keep up the good work!

~sprints

Re: throw our life away (User Rating: 1 )
by needs_change on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:31:48 PM AEST
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ain't that the ***** truth. life sucks. awsome writing though keep it up.

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