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Array ( [sid] => 10193 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => unlucky in love [time] => 2003-01-11 18:40:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A rose can't touch you,,
sunshine can't touch your smile,,
( so how can I ? )
beauty was there, so were you,,
I couldn't tell you apart,,
( your both beautiful )
How can I touch you,,
when your so fragile,,
( I want to hold you,,)
A heart of stone,,
Or a heart of gold,,
( no one can break these,,)

Unlucky in love,,she say's,,
because no one can except her
for what she does,,,
Unlucky in love,,she say's,,
for what she has done,,how can this be ?,,

I respect her this person for who she is,,
not for her past ,,
but for now ,,we live ,,as one,,,
that why I fell in love with her,,,

How can she say,,Unlucky in love,,
when I had fell in love with her,,
I guess I'm Unlucky in love,,
because I can't tell her how I feel,,
That I had fell in love with her,,

( she will never know,,,)

craig s. meeks [comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 24 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )

unlucky in love

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

A rose can't touch you,,
sunshine can't touch your smile,,
( so how can I ? )
beauty was there, so were you,,
I couldn't tell you apart,,
( your both beautiful )
How can I touch you,,
when your so fragile,,
( I want to hold you,,)
A heart of stone,,
Or a heart of gold,,
( no one can break these,,)

Unlucky in love,,she say's,,
because no one can except her
for what she does,,,
Unlucky in love,,she say's,,
for what she has done,,how can this be ?,,

I respect her this person for who she is,,
not for her past ,,
but for now ,,we live ,,as one,,,
that why I fell in love with her,,,

How can she say,,Unlucky in love,,
when I had fell in love with her,,
I guess I'm Unlucky in love,,
because I can't tell her how I feel,,
That I had fell in love with her,,

( she will never know,,,)

craig s. meeks

Copyright © spooky ... [ 2003-01-11 18:40:00]
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Re: unlucky in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 11th January 2003 @ 07:06:03 PM AEST
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you have a golden heart and it shows through your poetry keep em coming

Shari

Re: unlucky in love (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Sunday, 12th January 2003 @ 01:34:54 AM AEST
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This is truly a beautiful write for someone you obviously love very much ... I hope she will know one day :)))

Re: unlucky in love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Monday, 13th January 2003 @ 04:34:03 PM AEST
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Nice write, Craig.... Hope your luck changes soon..
Jenni

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