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you whore
you creature of nothing
you mirror of me
i am bored with your lack of subtlety

why do you expect me to feel
when it was you that told me i was
dead
im sorry
but
there was nothing we could do
but
we did all we can
but
you're gone

(i turned the colour of roses at the thought
that you had watched me die
in this pathetic blue gown
of regret)

so you tipped more forgetfulness
down my defenceless throaght
and all i could do was yawn

i hate you
and you
and you
and you
and him?
and her
and nothing

(thats all i am
one great
big
disposable bag
of nothing)

I have forgotten how to speak
in anything but grey
and it reminds me of the day
i died

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saskatoon

Contributed by bohemian_With_A_pen on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:30:46 AM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems

i despise you
you whore
you creature of nothing
you mirror of me
i am bored with your lack of subtlety

why do you expect me to feel
when it was you that told me i was
dead
im sorry
but
there was nothing we could do
but
we did all we can
but
you're gone

(i turned the colour of roses at the thought
that you had watched me die
in this pathetic blue gown
of regret)

so you tipped more forgetfulness
down my defenceless throaght
and all i could do was yawn

i hate you
and you
and you
and you
and him?
and her
and nothing

(thats all i am
one great
big
disposable bag
of nothing)

I have forgotten how to speak
in anything but grey
and it reminds me of the day
i died

Copyright © bohemian_With_A_pen ... [ 2005-07-23 04:30:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: saskatoon (User Rating: 1 )
by darkcutterBree on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:49:08 PM AEST
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colors are often used to describe feelings and oyu used them very well. the feeling insinde this is raw. its very well written...please check out my poetry nad commnet on them...you wont be dissapointed..i promise...i look forward to more of you work.

Re: saskatoon (User Rating: 1 )
by systematiq on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:57:35 PM AEST
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ur a skitzo .. theres like 10 of u ... damn ,.. i like it

Re: saskatoon (User Rating: 1 )
by libra on Monday, 25th July 2005 @ 02:06:23 AM AEST
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this is officially the greatest poem i have ever read. it was a systematic story of love hate shame regret and pain in just one poem.
you were great at using all of them in this poem. i loved it

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