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W hen you throw away
E verything you worked so hard to build
E verything you love and cherish
T hat ever loved and cherished you.

O nly in times like these
C an we reach a full understanding
T hat tells the truth of life
O r all the lies and faccdes we've built
B ecause its so terrible that
E ven the most vulnerable girl
R eaches out to someone.

D id we forget all of humanity
A nd lose all of reality
Y esterday is gonebut
S omedays just arent the same.
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Sweet October Days

Contributed by darkcutterBree on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 04:39:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

S omedays just arent the same
W hen you throw away
E verything you worked so hard to build
E verything you love and cherish
T hat ever loved and cherished you.

O nly in times like these
C an we reach a full understanding
T hat tells the truth of life
O r all the lies and faccdes we've built
B ecause its so terrible that
E ven the most vulnerable girl
R eaches out to someone.

D id we forget all of humanity
A nd lose all of reality
Y esterday is gonebut
S omedays just arent the same.

Copyright © darkcutterBree ... [ 2005-07-23 16:39:59]
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Re: Sweet October Days (User Rating: 1 )
by imagenuinefake on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 05:25:38 PM AEST
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Wow, this is really real. I can feel this.

Re: Sweet October Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Justintears on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 06:11:53 PM AEST
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Not only was i taken back at the way sweet october days was used throughtout the beginning of each line in the poem, but the power of the words was so compelling as well. The first five lines have to be the most emotional lines i have ever read, almost as if my feelings were talking back to me from the screen. Absolutely brilliant and beautiful....
It bring a tear to my eye.
~justin~

Re: Sweet October Days (User Rating: 1 )
by thepizzaguy on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:06:55 PM AEST
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These poems are rare. It's nice to see one written this way again.

Re: Sweet October Days (User Rating: 1 )
by syenn0512 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:19:56 AM AEST
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Comes October...a new begining and yet revoke the feeling of the past...
I feel your pain.

Re: Sweet October Days (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:39:59 AM AEST
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I liked how you presented this poem. It really is artful and your words are so nicely done. I can only i know what you meant with everyword.

Jane xx

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