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Array ( [sid] => 101967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => saddened questions [time] => 2005-07-23 23:52:44 [hometext] => [bodytext] => the pain fades or does it hide?
losing my heart deep inside
if i grow cold will the pain release?
or will i hold it till i am deceased

Does my pain show? does no one care?
if im always in pain then its always there
are they tired of me? should i grow cold?
then they would forget me before they grow old

did i murder myself in the search for my soul
trying to patch up that gaping hole
or are my eyes looking through anothers
and i see someone elses siblings and mother

or am i trying topretend this isnt my world
cause all the happiness turns to ash the moment i grab hold
or is it all a hologram and this is just a test
i want to forget and lay the memory to rest

cause all who know of it dont care or dont believe
what lie would i tell to make you percieve
my pain to be a lie, its no contest to me
... one day i will show you and then you shall see... [comments] => 6 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 32 [informant] => hardrocker15198916 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
saddened questions

Contributed by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 23rd July 2005 @ 11:52:44 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



the pain fades or does it hide?
losing my heart deep inside
if i grow cold will the pain release?
or will i hold it till i am deceased

Does my pain show? does no one care?
if im always in pain then its always there
are they tired of me? should i grow cold?
then they would forget me before they grow old

did i murder myself in the search for my soul
trying to patch up that gaping hole
or are my eyes looking through anothers
and i see someone elses siblings and mother

or am i trying topretend this isnt my world
cause all the happiness turns to ash the moment i grab hold
or is it all a hologram and this is just a test
i want to forget and lay the memory to rest

cause all who know of it dont care or dont believe
what lie would i tell to make you percieve
my pain to be a lie, its no contest to me
... one day i will show you and then you shall see...




Copyright © hardrocker15198916 ... [ 2005-07-23 23:52:44]
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Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by syenn0512 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 12:33:15 AM AEST
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Pain does fades sometimes.....but it takes a long time to fade away.....


Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:07:12 AM AEST
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Nice write Good word useage. It created emotion to the reader as it reached each Line


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Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by Whisper on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 02:26:04 AM AEST
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Nice write Good word useage. It created emotion to the reader as it reached each Line


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Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Sunday, 24th July 2005 @ 07:41:40 AM AEST
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Good write my friend and yes pain does fade it just takes time and it takes you letting go of the pain. Take care and let your pain go so you can release these thoughts. Your friend….Steve


Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 07:28:47 PM AEST
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I love the opening four lines... very deep and reflective. i can relate to much of it in some way or another.. .

keep your head high
very good poem

dW


Re: saddened questions (User Rating: 1 )
by loura on Monday, 19th September 2005 @ 03:28:23 PM AEST
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WOW

I don't know what to say...it's just..

Simply no words...
great!




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