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Array ( [sid] => 102111 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => They are all Natural, Go ahead and Feel for Yourself [time] => 2005-07-26 19:27:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don’t have time for being alone
A gradually more complicated outcome
Lines of print
My survival depends on it

No holes, several errors
Try harder
What level are you currently functioning at?

Something simple on which to hang your hat
Frontal tap
Aspects access an overlap

Don’t leave your secrets here with me
They won’t be here when you get back

Separate the chaff from the wheat
And let the chips fall where they will

What does appropriate mean?
Float through without any real commitment and claim

Nothing fancy
Solidifying connections
Focuses are on less than quality
Refrain from work engage in expectation
Content that isolates
My senses heightened
Celebrate the equivalency of becoming enlightened

Get sucked into this
Big deal misfits
Affairs and guest lists
Nothing out of characteristic
Or karma toast, herbal and naturalistic

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They are all Natural, Go ahead and Feel for Yourself

Contributed by mangos on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 07:27:56 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I don’t have time for being alone
A gradually more complicated outcome
Lines of print
My survival depends on it

No holes, several errors
Try harder
What level are you currently functioning at?

Something simple on which to hang your hat
Frontal tap
Aspects access an overlap

Don’t leave your secrets here with me
They won’t be here when you get back

Separate the chaff from the wheat
And let the chips fall where they will

What does appropriate mean?
Float through without any real commitment and claim

Nothing fancy
Solidifying connections
Focuses are on less than quality
Refrain from work engage in expectation
Content that isolates
My senses heightened
Celebrate the equivalency of becoming enlightened

Get sucked into this
Big deal misfits
Affairs and guest lists
Nothing out of characteristic
Or karma toast, herbal and naturalistic

______________________
______________

Copyright Â© mangos ... [ 2005-07-26 19:27:56]
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Re: They are all Natural, Go ahead and Feel for Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 08:39:46 PM AEST
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I like this! Something about the format I really like too...it just works for these words you brought alive...This comes across as a day to day struggle, and being unsure of what the future holds in store...Several lines really stood out for me:

"Lines of print
my survival depends on it..."

I think most fellow poets/writers could relate to that...

AND

"What does appropriate mean?
Float through without any real commitment and claim..."

Ahhh...words many can relate to as well...Good job with this write, I enjoyed reading it : )

Scorp.

Re: They are all Natural, Go ahead and Feel for Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by thepizzaguy on Tuesday, 26th July 2005 @ 09:53:54 PM AEST
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I liked the poem, but why the title? Great write!

Re: They are all Natural, Go ahead and Feel for Yourself (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 07:41:04 AM AEST
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Among my writes is one with 12 reads .. it's about sex .. LOL all the others have simplistic titles. Great idea. A tease..

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