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Screams from his anger cry out through the night as her fallen father bruises and beats out her lights.
A tear not must she shed for the fear of her father making her dred.
Until the day of her death her poor drunken father wont give it a rest.
From the harsh lashes he lays on her chest.
No matter if she pleads for the win, her tattered father wont give in.
For her, his daughter is so full of sin. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 13 [informant] => killer_kassie13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Child Tears

Contributed by killer_kassie13 on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:13:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Under the covers and beneath the bed she hides from her father and the thoughts in her head.
Screams from his anger cry out through the night as her fallen father bruises and beats out her lights.
A tear not must she shed for the fear of her father making her dred.
Until the day of her death her poor drunken father wont give it a rest.
From the harsh lashes he lays on her chest.
No matter if she pleads for the win, her tattered father wont give in.
For her, his daughter is so full of sin.

Copyright © killer_kassie13 ... [ 2005-07-27 20:13:52]
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Re: Child Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:23:28 PM AEST
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heartbreaking . I grew up in an alcoholic household rarely got the beating it was just many other things matters not its a hard way to grow up
Michelle

Re: Child Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Aaralyn on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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That is a very intense and heartbreaking piece! I too have a piece kind of like this! It really is horrible what is out there in this world! Good write!

Re: Child Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Misunderstood_gurl on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:28:43 PM AEST
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That's terrible...not your poem...your poem was awesome. I mean its just so terrible how a child's father can hurt them so much when they are suppose to be the people their child trusts and looks up too. If a child cant trust their own father...who can they trust? I''m only 14 but my whole family drinks...except my mom. But my father has never beat me. Gr8 write. Keep it up.

Re: Child Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kitty06 on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 09:41:03 PM AEST
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Wow...So much said in such a short poem...This is a truly amazing write. I really feel for you if you were able to write this amazing poem because of experience. But if you didn't then you are even more freaking awesomer at capturing such pain and suffering in so little words. The last line is so powerful and leaves the reader wanting. Again I say, truly amazing.

Re: Child Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 27th July 2005 @ 11:22:56 PM AEST
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true lives, unless glorified, are the ones everyone love to ignore. this is a good reminder.

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