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kiss tonight goodbye
and my dreamless heart means nothing
i shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray i shatter the night, and let lose the stars
to fall and burn this life away
only then will you understand
i am empty
and so i dance
in my starlight serenade
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dance the night away

Contributed by socialmisfit on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 03:42:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

forget i exist
kiss tonight goodbye
and my dreamless heart means nothing
i shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray i shatter the night, and let lose the stars
to fall and burn this life away
only then will you understand
i am empty
and so i dance
in my starlight serenade

Copyright © socialmisfit ... [ 2005-07-28 03:42:00]
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Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:35:58 AM AEST
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Awww..this is marvellous..."i shall cast that stone to the aching sky.. i shatter the night, and let lose the stars..to fall and burn this life away"..such powerful imagination is rarely seen on this site....venkat

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:36:26 AM AEST
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Ahhh makes perfect sense to me...sounds like warning someone from falling in love with you...because you're empty of emotion and will only hurt them in the long run...That's what I make of it anyway...*shrug* I really enjoyed this, and your expression was deep for so few lines...LOVE this:

"I shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray I shatter the night, and let loose the stars
to fall and burn this life away..."

Well done, and welcome back : )

Scorp.

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by lostrelic on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 04:53:15 AM AEST
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its a lovely write and i am happy to read it i hope it isnt what scorpion said everyone needs love (this from the guy who lives a sheltered life) but i hope to see somemore

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 06:48:43 AM AEST
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Awesome.
huggs,
emy

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by Adrianna on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 09:38:45 AM AEST
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I love it. I think I do understand how you are feeling.

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by gwenevere on Thursday, 28th July 2005 @ 05:22:59 PM AEST
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Great imagery.We all understand your wonderful words, Ros

Re: dance the night away (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 09:38:33 AM AEST
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Good stuff.

and my dreamless heart means nothing
i shall cast that stone to the aching sky
pray i shatter the night, and let lose the stars
to fall and burn this life away

Very inspired and exciting.

--Ghost Moth

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