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you turned down my cry
even if you'd said yes
knowing you, that'd be a lie

if you dont want to back me up
it's okay, i know three that will
they're the voices inside my head
which rarely, which ever, still

theres dozens of others out there
who, for some reason, acted like you
they share the same trait of coldness
they refused to help me too

fortunatly my brain made up
for the huge mistake you made
i have new advisors for me
my thoughts, they constantly raid

so maybe my actions aren't confirmed
in any way close to sane
but at least im shielded from that knowledge
the voices filter that from my brain

you don't want to back me up
it's okay i know three that will
they're the voices inside my head
which rarely, if ever, still

[comments] => 7 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 43 [informant] => PuppyChow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

3 Voices

Contributed by PuppyChow on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 07:07:49 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

i asked you for help
you turned down my cry
even if you'd said yes
knowing you, that'd be a lie

if you dont want to back me up
it's okay, i know three that will
they're the voices inside my head
which rarely, which ever, still

theres dozens of others out there
who, for some reason, acted like you
they share the same trait of coldness
they refused to help me too

fortunatly my brain made up
for the huge mistake you made
i have new advisors for me
my thoughts, they constantly raid

so maybe my actions aren't confirmed
in any way close to sane
but at least im shielded from that knowledge
the voices filter that from my brain

you don't want to back me up
it's okay i know three that will
they're the voices inside my head
which rarely, if ever, still

Copyright © PuppyChow ... [ 2005-07-29 19:07:49]
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Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:18:05 PM AEST
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magnificent
i think its a little comfort friendly
but lacking just a little
its still good though
--> Rae

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by dreamer_4_eternity on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 08:41:36 PM AEST
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I really like this, it's odd, but that's why i like it... it's not the ordinary stuff I always read on this site, and your original theme of this really makes the poem awesome... along with the last stanza, which i loved!

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by je2ica3 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 10:34:57 PM AEST
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good write

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie-Kie on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:23:53 PM AEST
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I must admit that I don't have this particular problem (which I have to say, lately seems to be a rarity) but you've created a very interesting poem out of it... I hope things become less confusing soon

Love ya'll,
~Kiela~

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:28:57 PM AEST
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impressive. what would be more useful even still would be the use of capitalization. good ending, and a good rhythm which i hardly come across.

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 01:30:24 PM AEST
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What a captivating peice of poetry, well written and interesting to read, voices
if harmonious can be most revealing,
very nice poem . . .

Ben

Re: 3 Voices (User Rating: 1 )
by Saint_41 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:53:20 PM AEST
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great write

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