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Array ( [sid] => 102298 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => new and edited pain doesn't hurt when its all i'v ever felt [time] => 2005-07-30 04:54:03 [hometext] => i wrote this as a song but i like it as a poem more [bodytext] =>
pain doesn't hurt
when its all i ever felt


i never thought that this would happen to me
i never thought id end up this way
like im some kind of enemy
never a friend to me
so look what you did to me
you got the best of me
and now I'm stuck with all the rest
it will never be the same oh i try to be normal
i try to put one foot in front of the other
and i fail
you don't even know i'm alive
i open my mouth cause i'm waiting for your love to fall from the sky
you build up walls no one can climb
the things you do should be a crime different life form
different species someday you will find the place
it's a place where love takes over hate
then you'll see all the things you do
affect everyone around you
do you see me
do you feel me
call your number
i can not get through
you don’t hear me and i dont understand
when i reach out i dont find your hand there a chill in the heat
feel the sky at my feet cuz i adore you
i cant ignore you sometimes, i get that overwhelming feeling,
so sad the
faces on TV,
if i try to make a difference would it help anyway,
then i stop and to myself i say
I decide how I live
I decide who I love
Choice is mine
And no one gets to make my mind up
I decide
and nothings going to make me change my mind



[comments] => 3 [counter] => 161 [topic] => 48 [informant] => paul_x_walker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
new and edited pain doesn't hurt when its all i'v ever felt

Contributed by paul_x_walker on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:54:03 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




pain doesn't hurt
when its all i ever felt


i never thought that this would happen to me
i never thought id end up this way
like im some kind of enemy
never a friend to me
so look what you did to me
you got the best of me
and now I'm stuck with all the rest
it will never be the same oh i try to be normal
i try to put one foot in front of the other
and i fail
you don't even know i'm alive
i open my mouth cause i'm waiting for your love to fall from the sky
you build up walls no one can climb
the things you do should be a crime different life form
different species someday you will find the place
it's a place where love takes over hate
then you'll see all the things you do
affect everyone around you
do you see me
do you feel me
call your number
i can not get through
you don’t hear me and i dont understand
when i reach out i dont find your hand there a chill in the heat
feel the sky at my feet cuz i adore you
i cant ignore you sometimes, i get that overwhelming feeling,
so sad the
faces on TV,
if i try to make a difference would it help anyway,
then i stop and to myself i say
I decide how I live
I decide who I love
Choice is mine
And no one gets to make my mind up
I decide
and nothings going to make me change my mind







Copyright © paul_x_walker ... [ 2005-07-30 04:54:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: new and edited pain doesn't hurt when its all i'v ever felt (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 04:55:42 AM AEST
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better better honey.

love mom


Re: new and edited pain doesn't hurt when its all i'v ever felt (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 06:23:35 AM AEST
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Excellent enjoyed

Love Angelxxx


Re: new and edited pain doesn't hurt when its all i'v ever felt (User Rating: 1 )
by solosoul on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 12:05:50 PM AEST
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very well put alot of ppl need to read this.i have thought the same thing but never put it on paper im glad you did!




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