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reality laced with poison,
struggling to remain, taking
each day as it enters, gasping
for air dying to breathe

My moment of weakness, now
hours in the midst, bracing for your
touch, my dying wish, your closed fist

My reality I pray to descend,
to dream peaceful to no end
remains of your pleasure, torture
at its best, now to rest, my sweet
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SWEET DREAMS

Contributed by sweetoccasion29 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:09:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Matter of fact, this is no dream
reality laced with poison,
struggling to remain, taking
each day as it enters, gasping
for air dying to breathe

My moment of weakness, now
hours in the midst, bracing for your
touch, my dying wish, your closed fist

My reality I pray to descend,
to dream peaceful to no end
remains of your pleasure, torture
at its best, now to rest, my sweet
sleep, unlimited dreams begin

Copyright © sweetoccasion29 ... [ 2005-07-31 13:09:12]
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Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Saint_41 on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 01:26:00 PM AEST
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good write

Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:32:06 PM AEST
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I have read this several times and I must say it is touching and moving poem!!! Well done,

Leia36

Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 06:50:41 PM AEST
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hmmm ... interesting .. I didn't get it really .. the closed fist part.

Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 07:36:01 PM AEST
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Beautiful in every way though i hope you are alright so very ambivelant in it's nature, well
done . . .

(((((souther belle)))))

Ben

Re: SWEET DREAMS (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Thursday, 4th August 2005 @ 12:34:16 PM AEST
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i can relate to the great escape found in dreams. The one we can't love while awake... we can in our dreams, and he always loves us back, until we awake.

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