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Array ( [sid] => 102414 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ***** You Mom [time] => 2005-08-01 02:10:47 [hometext] => This is about my alcoholic mom. She has lived a hard life but i feel no sympathy. I'm just venting out everything she has put me through... [bodytext] => You know that i'm not stupid
I am no god-damned fool
And yet you still don't understand
What has gotten between me and you

You have four children now
and what are they going to think?
When they awake to realize
You're a *****in cheat

No they are not stupid
but unfortunately they're young
and all i wish for them
is to stay strong

What will they think when you come home
All drunk and stumbling through the door
And what will they think
When your husband beats you and calls you a whore

Too many times i have saved you
From a night out on the town
Dragging you out of the shower
When i could have let you drown

I know the truth about you
Yet still i can't decide
Should i love you or hate you
Till the day i die? [comments] => 7 [counter] => 199 [topic] => 6 [informant] => Ineedanap [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

***** You Mom

Contributed by Ineedanap on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:10:47 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You know that i'm not stupid
I am no god-damned fool
And yet you still don't understand
What has gotten between me and you

You have four children now
and what are they going to think?
When they awake to realize
You're a *****in cheat

No they are not stupid
but unfortunately they're young
and all i wish for them
is to stay strong

What will they think when you come home
All drunk and stumbling through the door
And what will they think
When your husband beats you and calls you a whore

Too many times i have saved you
From a night out on the town
Dragging you out of the shower
When i could have let you drown

I know the truth about you
Yet still i can't decide
Should i love you or hate you
Till the day i die?

Copyright © Ineedanap ... [ 2005-08-01 02:10:47]
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Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Dusty on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:15:58 AM AEST
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Oh god! I so FEEL THIS ONE. My mother is the same way and it totally puts you in a situation, like How did I get to be the Mom here? This really sucks, I know . I am sorry for you.
Dusty

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by ElevenToedSloth on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:16:08 AM AEST
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Alcoholic mom's suck.

I started mine on fire.

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 02:47:13 AM AEST
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dude i felt this from first word to last

my mom smokes man
even when im sick

now adays i feel like i have cancer from all the smoke i have had to breath in

so yeah i too have said ***** you mom

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 1st August 2005 @ 03:49:29 AM AEST
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wow.
Truly emotive and saddening to read.
May the road rise up to meet you, hon.
(this piece is breath-taking)

Wish you all the best.
xoxx

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by all_that_i_can_be on Wednesday, 3rd August 2005 @ 01:21:12 AM AEST
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its awful how much i feel this poem. my moms alcoholic to. and my dad. i know how much pain it can create. its an awful thing to deal with. good luck with everything.

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by xthrewmyluvawayx on Monday, 8th August 2005 @ 02:02:34 AM AEST
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aww im soo sorry about ur mother....i can sort of relate...u read my poem "daddy" he was an alcoholic and drug addict...i really hope u and ur brothers/sisters get through this and i hope everything gets better for u.....

Re: ***** You Mom (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_fighter_chick on Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 01:15:23 PM AEST
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This is a good poem, i liked it. it sounds deep.

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